Bridal Spider Poem by Bri Edwards

Bridal Spider

Rating: 4.2

Bridal Spider

The bride and groom exchanged vows and I do's.
It was time for a kiss, but an arachnid* had other...views.
'Spider' had hidden behind the bride's filmy veil &
when 'Spider' was seen, groom & bride did both WAIL,
..........and then both jumped out of their wedding shoes.

* arachnids: The term arachnid refers to a class of animals
that includes spiders, scorpions, mites, and ticks.



October 11th 2024
(It is almost Halloween! ! Boo!)

Friday, October 11, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: animals,october,wedding
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It only required me/my seeing my bride for me to get out of my shoes, socks, and EVERYTHING ELSE! ! ! I have at least one other spider poem. 'Spider Is Watching You' bri ;)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 October 2024

Great images that bring us to the scene. Very entertaining. A well crafted humorous write, Bri. Top Marks! !

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Bri Edwards 14 November 2024

Thanks R M, for visiting the scene!

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Savita Tyagi 11 October 2024

Hilarious! All of a sudden I am thinking of Valsa, she would make a great limerick out of it. May be you could too.

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Bri Edwards 14 November 2024

Maybe, Savita, Valsa could, as I taught her all she knows about limericks. ;))) REALLY, I think I may have.

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Rob Lamberton 14 November 2024

Who know what is hidden by the veil (web) that hides the face of the bride.

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Bri Edwards 14 November 2024

I see more comments are on their way. Was this poem a Poem of the Day? ? ! ! My thanks go to all readers and commenters. bri ;)

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Bharati Nayak 14 November 2024

Halloween gives hilarious ideas to Bri's fertile brain. We all need a bit of humour before cold December enters. Thanks Bri for the slice of humour every now and then.

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Anjandev Roy 14 November 2024

This is well penned..... enjoyed.... thank u....

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Interesting and humorous. Enjoyed

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 November 2024

lol Bri This poem made me smile Bravo! ! !

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