'Broken Heart' Poem by elsee daniel

'Broken Heart'

Rating: 4.6


I waited for years to make him mine;
I nurtured him with my love and raised him to shine.
I saw him with another girl sitting to dine.
I wished him all the best and felt everything should be good and fine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 25 September 2009

emotional! you have a large heart filled with love and forgiveness

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Obinna Eruchie 23 September 2009

This is adorable, love and forgiveness well expressed.

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Aparna Sinha 23 September 2009

That is what love is all about...beautiful! ! very nicely done, thanks for sharing

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 22 September 2009

i can never accept something like this... mine should be mine, i can never sacrifice my love to someone else...

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Christopher Lee 22 September 2009

your heart is big... Forget the times he walked by, Forget the times he made you cry, Forget the times he spoke your name, Remember now your not the same. Forget the times he held your hand, Forget the sweet things if you can, Forget the times & Don't pretend, Remember now he's just your friend..................

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The Lost.. 06 November 2009

too short but touching and well written :) .waiting for your comments too :) .thanks.

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Rafique Farooqi 05 November 2009

Short anbd beatiful poem i like your style

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 01 October 2009

a great attitude...must hurt the girl inside....

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Brenda Arroyo 29 September 2009

Your strength is beautiful.

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Manjula Arumuga Nainar 25 September 2009

hi da, nice dear............. forgiveness is a great love.......dear

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