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Broken Up With

Rating: 4.1
My life has ended two days ago
when you allowed your heart to someone else go
what a fool i am, i still love you although
you`ve left me without thinking what you me owe
i lived in the dream world that has no flaw
while considered reality my major foe

death counts anxiously minutes by exact
every minute that passes reminds me with the fact
that with the passage of time past becomes more past
and that enlightens your leaving`s impact
all my feelings i have just packed
because i am going where love does not last
Tareq Jalabi
Wednesday, June 18, 2008
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COMMENTS
Rana Zalloum 07 September 2010
because i am going where love does not last? -> please let me know if you ever find that place...
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Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan 22 November 2009
Very good, you picked the right words that describe your silent despair... Are you cold blooded? I am.
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Sherri Coulter 12 September 2009
ohhh, the pain, when with thunder comes rain. good write 10+
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Riya Riska 05 June 2009
Ough... Blue..as your eyes..
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Ana Guerrero 13 March 2009
very sweet it's silent to me compared to your other poems but I really do like this one
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Kelsey Tennant 08 January 2009
oh my goodness thats exactly how i feel right now! ! ! thats AMAZING! ! !
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anne adam 01 January 2009
it seem that iam not the only one who's in love lol but i really like it, keep it up
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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008
Vow! Great write! I enjoy it!
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Jennifer Sollmann 30 December 2008
i love the last line! 'gone to a place where love does not go' it's simply beautiful.: ]
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Hailie Workman 28 December 2008
i love it. its so emotional and deep. nice!
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