Tareq Jalabi

Rookie (20\11\1988 / Russian Federation)

Crazy Llove - Poem by Tareq Jalabi

I am holding a knife
By which to end my life
Driving it through my guts
You may consider me nuts
But i dare to swear
That i`ll be there
Meeting in paradise
Life would be fair
Following you to hell
Shows you how much i care
Please, end your life
I know we will survive
Use the same knife
So love can bring us alive

Comments about Crazy Llove by Tareq Jalabi

  • (9/26/2010 3:35:00 AM)

    you seek an end...
    to this insanity, to this cruelty....
    both worlds collide....
    you see no hope...
    but on the contrary..
    hope and love are intwined
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  • Dwi Utami (9/5/2010 4:49:00 PM)

    I see everything looks very good for crazy love
    you write this poetry
    like crazy love is true
    your poetry so nice for the first sequence.
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  • (9/12/2009 11:51:00 AM)

    I bleed easy, blue eyes, doesn't take much.............10+ (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (6/6/2009 1:26:00 AM)

    doing ur first poem...been here a short while
    steeely blue eyes...with a glint of damasque
    vacant....dark and devoid
    a dance in the void

    poetry good....reminds me of...our younger colleagues may like to do the video
    http: //news.bbc.co.uk/onthisday/hi/dates/stories/november/18/newsid_2540000/2540209.stm

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  • (5/31/2009 2:32:00 AM)

    'Following you to hell
    Shows you how much i care'...
    this expression constitues the soul of the poem, Blue Eyes...good piece...i liked...10
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  • (3/13/2009 11:58:00 AM)

    Very beautiful it's just beautiful (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2008 8:57:00 PM)

    Love is always crazy and insane but that is the woderful part of it. (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2008 9:00:00 PM)

    i have felt this exact emotion when my boyfriend broke my heart and my friends made me realize that life is more valuable than love. so dont let your love get in the way of life. its great good job! (Report) Reply

  • (12/10/2008 3:07:00 PM)

    i love it..! ! i love it..! ! u rock keep goin (Report) Reply

  • Miriam Maia Padua (12/2/2008 9:33:00 PM)

    hmm....another romeo and juliet....you write greatly
    but don't do what you feel in your poem lol....
    its not paradise killing oneself in the name of love.....
    It's better to love and lost than to have not love at all...
    ...just don't be carried by crazy love...lol
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  • (11/28/2008 2:52:00 PM)

    OMG! I love it! It's awesome. So dangerous. (Report) Reply

  • (11/22/2008 8:04:00 AM)

    oh, how love could be so dangerous! !
    strong piece.. love it! !
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  • (11/21/2008 1:46:00 PM)

    wow this truly is crazy love (lol)
    love the poem.....in a strange way (lol just joking

    10 awsome piece
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  • (11/21/2008 6:48:00 AM)

    i love it i love it i love it
    it's sooo nice love poem u rock
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/14/2008 12:44:00 PM)

    Love is always crazy, and the poem is also. Emotional composition.10 for it. (Report) Reply

  • (8/30/2008 3:12:00 PM)

    the picture of crazy love... I've thought it plenty of times myself (Report) Reply

  • (8/17/2008 11:05:00 AM)

    Hi Blue Eyes,
    It's a great poem.
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  • (8/13/2008 7:02:00 PM)

    This would surely be some crazy love... (Report) Reply

  • (8/5/2008 11:23:00 AM)

    wow it was amazing. u showed how much u r ready to sacrifice for ur lover... sweet... (Report) Reply

  • Bethany Buhl (7/13/2008 8:09:00 PM)

    This is twisted and I can't find the words to express what i'm thinking and twisted doesn't mean to be good enough, but I guess it's gonna have to be. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, June 20, 2011

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