I found my steps, wrong,
The period of astray, long,
The shadow of Satan, strong.
And I asked to my 'self',
'Am I the brother of Geetha Jayakumar,
Belonging to the family of poets'.
My'self'was quick to answer,
Refined with the divine transfer,
And my heart and soul to refer.
'I am the brother of Geetha Jayakumar,
Belonging to the family of poets',
And steps became right, strong and bright.
poetry always make our mind refined- you belong to the poets family definitely
Good that you found yourself Abdulrazak and now you know what you are to do on this earthly sojourn. Best of luck.
A Wonderful write with beautiful lines..... I found my steps, wrong, The period of astray, long, The shadow of Satan, strong. I am not sure what I should comment on this poem. All I can tell is dear brother, Welcome to Poemhunter. Keep on writing. You poems are beautiful to read.
Thank you sister for your compassionate words and motivation
Well expressed in a poet family, nice writing sir.
Nicely done Abdulrazak! Lovely expression From beginning to end! I wish it was a bit longer lol. Great read
Marvellous expression. The favourite lines are......I found my steps, wrong, The period of astray, long, The shadow of Satan, strong. Thanks for sharing. 10
Ameen to what Mr. C.P Sharma said True universal brotherhood of man and God watches over us all with his benevolence. The strings of love bind us all together dear Abdulrazak, a great write. I salute you for your love for your sister and a fellow poet.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a sensible and bold confession and what an amazing resilience. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.