Abdulrazak Aralimatti


Brother Of Geetha Jayakumar - Poem by Abdulrazak Aralimatti

I found my steps, wrong,
The period of astray, long,
The shadow of Satan, strong.

And I asked to my 'self',
'Am I the brother of Geetha Jayakumar,
Belonging to the family of poets'.

My'self'was quick to answer,
Refined with the divine transfer,
And my heart and soul to refer.

'I am the brother of Geetha Jayakumar,
Belonging to the family of poets',
And steps became right, strong and bright.

Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality

Form: Triolet


Comments about Brother Of Geetha Jayakumar by Abdulrazak Aralimatti

  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (3/22/2017 11:49:00 AM)


    Well expressed in a poet family, nice writing sir. (Report) Reply

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  • Kewayne Wadley (10/25/2015 10:32:00 AM)


    Nicely done Abdulrazak! Lovely expression
    From beginning to end!
    I wish it was a bit longer lol. Great read
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/12/2015 3:14:00 AM)


    Marvellous expression. The favourite lines are......I found my steps, wrong,
    The period of astray, long,
    The shadow of Satan, strong. Thanks for sharing. 10
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  • Ayman Parray (7/27/2015 3:17:00 PM)


    Ameen to what Mr. C.P Sharma said True universal brotherhood of man and God watches over us all with his benevolence. The strings of love bind us all together dear Abdulrazak, a great write. I salute you for your love for your sister and a fellow poet. (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (7/17/2015 1:19:00 AM)


    Wonderful...true brotherhood of man and fatherhood of God. (Report) Reply

  • (7/15/2015 9:46:00 AM)


    Human thoughts and universal feelings makes oneself to perfection and when it comes through poem it is a good thing for humanity which is the binding force of peaceful life. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (6/27/2015 1:08:00 PM)


    Wonderful is this world of Poem Hunter which unites souls of poets.A great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Sekharan Pookkat (4/16/2015 7:44:00 AM)


    poetry always make our mind refined- you belong to the poets family definitely (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (4/2/2015 11:37:00 AM)


    What a sensible and bold confession and what an amazing resilience. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (4/2/2015 7:00:00 AM)


    A Wonderful write with beautiful lines.....

    I found my steps, wrong,
    The period of astray, long,
    The shadow of Satan, strong.

    I am not sure what I should comment on this poem. All I can tell is dear brother, Welcome to Poemhunter.

    Keep on writing. You poems are beautiful to read.
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    Abdulrazak Aralimatti (4/2/2015 7:40:00 AM)

    Thank you sister for your compassionate words and motivation

  • Neela Nath Das (3/29/2015 9:12:00 PM)


    O so nice tribute! Loved reading. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (3/28/2015 8:32:00 AM)


    So pleased you have found your steps. Geetha is such a beautiful poet and I feel her every word. I thank you and welcome you to PH (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/28/2015 3:01:00 AM)


    Liked this lovely poem........................... (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (3/28/2015 12:40:00 AM)


    Good that you found yourself Abdulrazak and now you know what you are to do on this earthly sojourn. Best of luck. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 28, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 28, 2015


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