Peace Day Poems: 54 / 500

Your Day

Rating: 4.9

In the name of God, start your day,
Neat and tidy mark your way.
Melodiously utter your words,
Like the chirping of birds.

Uprightly perform your duty,
In it lies your beauty.
Straightforwardly refuse the wrong,
Being brave and headstrong,

Consciously follow the Lord's law.
Without delay, doubt and flaw.
In the name of God end the day,
Rest in peace, as long you lay.

'20/12/2014
Bijapur Karnataka India'

Friday, December 19, 2014
Peace Day Poems: 54 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: devotion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem is about how to begin and end the day.I wanted to send a message and wrote it
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 22 December 2014

A beautiful prayer for the whole day, from dawn to dusk.................10

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Subbaraman N V 19 December 2014

Rightly said. That alone sustains us. Thanks for sharing.

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Melvina Germain 29 July 2015

A most beautiful flow, marvelous poem. A lovely way to end ones day with peace and tranquility.....

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Jasbir Chatterjee 19 March 2015

Beautiful lines: In the name of God, start your day, Neat and tidy mark your way....In the name of God end the day, Rest in peace, as long you lay. Unfortunately, in our daily struggle for existence, we forget this and end up frustrated

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2015

Consciously follow the Lord's law. Without delay, doubt and flaw. In the name of God end the day, Rest in peace, as long you lay...........Marvellous depiction like a prayer for the whole day. A didactic and spiritual poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. ........10

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ABDUL QAYYUM MULLA 12 May 2020

In the name of god, star your day, every lines are finest you are greatest,10 I have given to your poems for all best happened with everyone when we take name of the God.Excellent and ever best my sir, proud to be 3rd rank from India in poets content..

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AbdulKAYYUM 05 September 2019

This poem is written by Abdulrazak, which has a great port of India.The poet has a lot of knowledge.May Allah bless on you

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 May 2018

excellent and exquisite faith on GOD- n the name of God, .................. Melodiously utter your words, Like the chirping of birds. .............. Consciously follow the Lord's law. Without delay, great 10++++

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Aarifa Almas 20 March 2016

The message of an important reminder to always remember our Lord is very beautifully presented in ur poem..

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Navod Dilhara 02 March 2016

You have wonderfully composed this poem with a great rhythm. Nice1

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