Charities. Poem by Abdulrazak Aralimatti

Charities.

Rating: 5.0


If your bike tyre got punctured,
Never be in dissappointment.
But thank God for making a means,
A portion in a livelihood,
For a poor and hardworking man.

If your food got rotten or stale,
Never be in dissappointment.
But thank God for making a means,
Food for a dog or cat or crow,
To fill their hungry stomach.

If your hand gave a coin extra,
Don't be in dissappointment.
But thank God for making a means,
A portion in a livelihood,
For a poor and hardworking man.

Friday, October 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 16 October 2015

Let us be kind and noble to those who are less fortunate than us. Amazing contemplation transformed into a lovely poem. Thanks.

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Sanjukta Nag 16 October 2015

Things happen for a reason - and you presented this concept very craftily. Great write!

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 16 October 2015

Self sacrificing and very honorable thoughts. I liked the moral behind every stanza

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Valsa George 16 October 2015

If we learn to look at everything that happen in our lives, life will definitely be much happier! In fact this is the right perspective! But how many of us can think like this! Some how all of us can develop a soft corner for the less fortunate and share with them something from our bounty! Very lofty thoughts!

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Kelly Kurt 16 October 2015

A very inspirational poem, Abdulrazak. I try to look for the positive in everything. It only takes a moment to find a silver lining and it dissipates the feelings of frustration. Thanks for sharing

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This poem teaches about wastage of food and financial management. Well expressed, thanks for sharing.full vote

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 February 2016

It is better we help the poor when we have the means. Thanks ofr sharing.

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Liza Sudina 05 November 2015

Always thank God for everything! without asking why. How right and wonderful!

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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2015

Simple yet mind blowing poem, I liked it, One should always think positively in all situation, we know not and Almighty is all aware about our intentions, our deeds and our life path...Thanks for sharing such a nice poem...10++

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T Rajan Evol 28 October 2015

In all ways and in all circumstances one should thank Almighty..Nice poem,

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