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Bubbles

Rating: 5.0

Everything
we are
when feeling
was a part
of moments passed
Where is present?
.
Every-space
is the center
He stays

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Monday, October 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: god,meditation,questions,secrets,space,time
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 10 October 2017

Life is a mystery hard to unravel. Only the Almighty holds the key. A profound write. A10

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Bharati Nayak 11 January 2020

from every-inside He directs time to flow... out all sides . Though having gates in every dot is there a world... hidden, locked! ! ! - - A great poem with deep philosophical connotation and lovely poetic expression.

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Mj Lemon 10 September 2018

And it sometimes said that when we are 'in a bubble' we have an impossible time coming to terms with our immediate surroundings. Believing that we are floating, a part of a larger universe, however, may just be the reality. An incredible work, Ali. One your finest.

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Susan Williams 24 October 2017

Everything we are when feeling was a part of moments passed Where is present? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Everything we ever experienced happened in a flash of a second or in a series of flashes of seconds- -over so quickly it is a wonder we remember and remember so well in details both large and fine. We are more past than we are present and I suppose we are more future than past and present... Very well written. The thoughts expressed are a valid springboard for deeper meditation. .

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Unwritten Soul 12 October 2017

You are clever dear, nice observant and such original you...He always give us a way to live better..we just need to trust Him!

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Valsa George 11 October 2017

We are confronted with endless questions about life, time and space....! But everything is shrouded in mystery! Only God has an answer and we live believing that there is a world that lies locked which we may enter after our life here! A reflective poem!

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