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Close Your Eyes

Rating: 5.0

A word hurts
A dream dies
Lies were truths
Truths are lies

Friday, March 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions
Nosheen Irfan 04 March 2017

A succinct gem. You have summed up the whole life of man in these few words. We often face disillusionment in life. They don't say for nothing that life is a mystery. A10.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 March 2017

Yes, human emotions can do anything, a thoughtful poem.

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Mj Lemon 10 March 2017

This is an amazing work....a depiction of what may happen, either metaphorically or literally, when one's eyes are willfully closed shut. A perfect 10.

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Unwritten Soul 09 March 2017

And Pains are real But real can be so surreal All in circle circulating through tears

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Valsa George 09 March 2017

Wonderful.... There is only the core, no pith or outer skin! Love this brevity!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 March 2017

Wow a wonderful poem in the effects of words. Supers rhyming in brevity. Kudos brother.

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Susan Williams 04 March 2017

Brevity does pack a punch

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