Buried Dead Poem by .Pd. is here

Buried Dead

Rating: 4.6


When Two Pieces Of Broken Heart Cannot Be Glued,
That’s When I Die Waiting For You.
Bury Me, Like They Do To The Dead,
But Don’t Put Me In A Coffin
Bury Me In Your Heart Instead.

At Least I’ll Be Dead And Have Peace Ahead
Knowing I Sleep In The Very Place I Always Chased.
Because All I Ever Wanted Of You
Was To Give Me The Key To Your Heart.
And I’ve Got The Key Today, But…

…The Love Is Silenced And I’m Buried Dead.
Spiritless
Buried Dead…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tranquil Ocean 17 September 2006

Really liked this one....You are also becoming the Amour Queen! ! ! Love...TO

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Nalini Hebbar 17 September 2006

preets...HAPPY BIRTHDAY! ...so happy to be able to wish you on this day though a little late in the day...great poem...my! you are improving dat by day...love...nalini

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Catastrophe King 17 September 2006

You are maturing on your love poems for sure. Great going Preets! I love the way you handle your subject in the poem. But, I would rather have a softer and a more romantic end.... yours is nice too! Keep this up..... hope you did have a wonderful birthday... the last of your teens ;)

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Vra Parody 18 September 2006

awesome! ....................................................the dots are just because i have to use 20 characters

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Barbara James 21 September 2006

enjoyed reading many of your poems. Barbara

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Irene Clark-hogg 13 February 2009

This poem is so sad. I feel your sadness coming through your words. I hope you soon find another love for broken hearts do mend. Irene *Hugs*

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Manonton Dalan 07 September 2008

rise Pd. rise from crevices of that cruel heart and show world you can survive. nice poem... thanks for sharing.

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Ershad Mazumder 07 July 2008

Preeti, I feel you and me are one.Its the same soul.

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Roy Storey 10 October 2007

Many a true word, a nice poem thank you.

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Terance Chetty 15 June 2007

Greatly said, the way poetry should be written

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