Buried Dead Poem by .Pd. is here

Buried Dead

Rating: 4.6


When Two Pieces Of Broken Heart Cannot Be Glued,
That’s When I Die Waiting For You.
Bury Me, Like They Do To The Dead,
But Don’t Put Me In A Coffin
Bury Me In Your Heart Instead.

At Least I’ll Be Dead And Have Peace Ahead
Knowing I Sleep In The Very Place I Always Chased.
Because All I Ever Wanted Of You
Was To Give Me The Key To Your Heart.
And I’ve Got The Key Today, But…

…The Love Is Silenced And I’m Buried Dead.
Spiritless
Buried Dead…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anand Shankar 08 April 2007

Hey! Emotions typified! Liked the way u wrote it, the 5 line stanza style :) keep it up

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Nikunj Parikh 05 April 2007

has a gr8 emotions to it....... it touched me..... i love this poem...i think its one of ur best! !

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Ashish R 19 December 2006

Very powerful emotions here preets.Cudnt help the 'WOW' from coming out of my mouth.Great work. Ashish.

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Shivapriya Surve 18 December 2006

How genuine, honest and powerful! Pharach sundar! !

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Arshaj Gaikwad 23 September 2006

good poem......well xpressed in a handfull of words....

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Irene Clark-hogg 13 February 2009

This poem is so sad. I feel your sadness coming through your words. I hope you soon find another love for broken hearts do mend. Irene *Hugs*

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Manonton Dalan 07 September 2008

rise Pd. rise from crevices of that cruel heart and show world you can survive. nice poem... thanks for sharing.

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Ershad Mazumder 07 July 2008

Preeti, I feel you and me are one.Its the same soul.

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Roy Storey 10 October 2007

Many a true word, a nice poem thank you.

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Terance Chetty 15 June 2007

Greatly said, the way poetry should be written

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