Cake Poem by Roger McGough

Cake

Rating: 3.8


i wanted one life
you wanted another
we couldn't have our cake
so we ate eachother.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Nik 08 February 2010

It's really... Genius. I don't have another words to explain my feelings)

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 29 February 2012

Lovely, I like the poem's with and humor.

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Susan Williams 06 October 2015

upon second thoughts there is a dark wit in this

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Ian Curtis 12 October 2005

This poem is simply genius

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Frances Macaulay Forde 09 November 2004

This piece really touched me - I have been where the poet is... And, although I understand the writer may have been feeling small when this was composed; I personally, would have used a capital 'I'.

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Oyin Famakin 14 July 2020

I really love all of Roger McGough's funny poems.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 January 2019

A thought provoking poem. Cleverly written.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 January 2019

Hehehe.... I makes me sneer............. Nice one by Roger MacGough.....

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Khairul Ahsan 17 January 2019

Apparently funny, but certainly there lies sad episodes beneath the lines.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 January 2019

Deeply meaningful drop. Sometimes life gives a shock and you can't take the same path with the one you love. Thanks for sharing.

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Roger McGough

Roger McGough

Liverpool / England
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