So Sorry Poem by Brian Dorn

So Sorry

Rating: 4.5


I'm sorry for what I've done
I'm sorry for who I've been
Sorry for where its gone
So sorry to lose a friend

I'm sorry I let you down
I'm sorry things can't be the same
Sorry for my impropriety
So sorry I'm the one to blame

I'm sorry I wasn't strong enough
I'm sorry for not following through
Sorry for dropping the ball
So sorry for me and you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Loves 20 July 2007

Great idea. When you don't have the humility/humbleness to apologize to that person from the heart, directly, just write a manipulative poem saying you're sorry. Magnificant idea. That way, your pride doesn't get hurt, nor your reputation for people knowing that you screwed up. Keep up the great word, Bri. 'God' bless. ~Psycho.

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Diane Violet 15 December 2006

To recognize the wrong in something we've done and be truly sorry about it, you have displayed quite well here Brian. All the best, Diane

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R R 01 March 2007

Excellent Poem Brian, Not too many people are compassionate enough to say they are sorry. You at least know how to. It really takes a good person to. Take care.

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David Harris 06 March 2007

Brian, an excellent poem. Displays all the virtues that we all wish we had. It so easy to say sorry, but some of us just can't. It doesn't make everything go away, but at least it helps. Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Leila K 29 March 2007

This poems says so much...it takes real courage to apologise from the heart...lovely poem Brian...love Leila

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Susan Williams 09 September 2020

an excellent apology but would a woman's heart forgive?

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 July 2019

the sorry it's the character of modesty best feelings of humanity

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Adeeb Alfateh 25 July 2019

I'm sorry I wasn't strong enough I'm sorry for not following through Sorry for dropping the ball So sorry for me and you it's beautiful poem beautiful and great 10++++++++++

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Charity Nduhiu 20 January 2015

Sorry for dropping the ball. I am so sorry you were not strong enough. So sweet

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Adeline Foster 11 April 2013

Good poem, well expressed, like it. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline

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