Dark In Me Poem by Brian Dorn

There's a likeness to a snake, representing 'The bad in me' Image apon image, speaks of the dark corners, the sinister side. A bit Edgar Allan Po well done again Would need a copy to say more, but certainly found rich imagery here Daphne G

Someone long ago told me that each and every one of us, has something that we would rather not share with others...that dark side of us... You've been very honest here, and you've done a great job with your poem. Very nicely done Brian! ! Hugs, Dee

Classical feeling to your writes... I enjoy the Freudian inferences.. John

I too believe everyone has skeletons in their closet, therefore everyone has a dark side. Excellent poem, I enjoyed the read Brian.---Melvina---

I loved this poem, dark, mysterious and exciting! Everyone has a dark side! CJ

Welcome to my haunted house Dare to see the dark in me- - - - - - - - -> that is a stunning opener and leads me into a different direction- a darker direction

greatly written the stanza- Stroke my ego, don't be shy Give my id his equal pay Watch the serpent slither by My alter ego's chance to play /// love it

an honest word on human nature............well done.

I love this one and without any hesitation am adding it as my favourite

one of my favourites i love it