Can't Get You Out Of My Mind Poem by Alexie Whitman

Can't Get You Out Of My Mind

Rating: 4.5

My life has become a mess without you
And nothing's gonna change it, no matter what I do
I think I really messed up somewhere
Because now you really don't seem to care
It feels as if we are on the other side of the globe
So I take my car and hit the road
Just to see you for one more time
And I still miss your voice sometimes
Now we're two different strangers
Standing far away from each other
And as our eyes meet
We turn our backs and walk away
Even though we're no more
I could still walk with you to the core
I know you miss me too
Then why are you acting so cruel
The entire thing happened so fast
That I really don't know if our memories are gonna last
So some nights I go back to our memories
Because it had always been an amazing story
Sometimes I miss you when I'm all alone
And I think that you really have moved on
Though you never were very kind
I still can't get you out of my mind

Saturday, September 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: break up
Suryendu Chaudhury 19 September 2020

Effective. Straightforward.

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 September 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Alexie W. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 21 September 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings.... very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Loved this gem of a poem. Congratulations

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Cindy Kagori 15 January 2021

A lot of improvement on this one. I love it

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Quoth Theraven 07 October 2020

Alexie, I can feel the confusion and longing in this poem. Makes the reader wonder at what happened. QtR

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Chan Mongol 05 October 2020

Broken heart! Well written. I enjoyed.

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Arb Rudi 02 October 2020

I love it. Breakups sometimes can be tough and leave you devastated. Feeling like everything is falling apart has got to be the worst feeling ever. Extremely straightforward. Continue writing!

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