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Candle In The Window - Poem by Bill Cantrell ...

I wrote a poem,
On top of a star,
With hopes that you might see
That twinkle at the edge of night,
Is a vow to you from me
That though a million light years pass,
Beyond the gates of time
My love will never rest until,
We meet on the other side

Topic(s) of this poem: poetry

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Resurrection, love, hope

Comments about Candle In The Window by Bill Cantrell ...

  • Rebecca NavarreRebecca Navarre (4/28/2019 4:08:00 PM)

    Ever such breathtaking beauty and heart! ..
    Beautifully inspiring! .. Thank you ever so much
    for sharing! .. Ever so very many
    10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .................................+++++

    Rebecca NavarreRebecca Navarre(12/18/2019 3:57:00 PM)

    May you and your family have a Blessed Christmas! ..

    Bill CantrellBill Cantrell(12/13/2019 6:08:00 PM)

    Your comment is truly appreciated my friend!

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  • Susan WilliamsSusan Williams (4/21/2019 10:01:00 PM)

    The loveliest soft and gentle love poem for a loved one who has gone ahead... I swear, Bill, you are a master at stringing words together so smoothly that we follow you into your world and into your heart and feel for a brief moment what missing a loved one is - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Bless you. The poetry is of course 10++++++++++++ but the warmth and yearning is uncritiqueable. (Report)Reply

    Bill CantrellBill Cantrell(12/13/2019 6:05:00 PM)

    Wow, thank you Susan! ! ! !

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  • Aqua FlowerAqua Flower (3/22/2019 8:17:00 PM)

    Hopes and dreams is something to live for! She'll see the twinkle of those stars and meet you on the other side...poetically beautiful! (Report)Reply

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  • Steffani Limara (3/19/2019 8:13:00 PM)

    Very nice poem. (Report)Reply

    Bill Cantrell(12/13/2019 6:06:00 PM)

    Thank you for reading and also taking the time to comment, I truly appreciate it

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (3/19/2019 7:31:00 PM)

    A powerful write! The first four lines are just fabulous! A brilliant short poem....10 (Report)Reply

    Bill CantrellBill Cantrell(3/23/2019 3:13:00 PM)

    Thank you Dillip

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 19, 2019

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