~ Cannibal Gives Walkover To Raper ~ [65 Words Of Protest Against Recent Gang-Rape In Delhi, India] Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Cannibal Gives Walkover To Raper ~ [65 Words Of Protest Against Recent Gang-Rape In Delhi, India]

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~ Cannibal Gives Walkover to Raper ~ [65 words as protest against recent gang-rape in Delhi, India]

Ms. Nivedita
UK
31 December 2012

[Recent episode of brutal gang-rape
By famished-feminine-flesh-wolves
In Delhi on 23 years
Paramedic girl and finally
Succumbed in Singapore.[A]

Who said, 'Mom I want to live.[B]

This poetry a biblio protest
To generates poetic consciousness.[C]

Women are used by some men as
'Sex-toy-use-and-throw-or-kill'
Mournfully__ niv.][D]

() ~ () ~ () ~ () ~ () ~ () ~ () ~ ()

Sexited lurid smutty raper
Moral derma numb thicker
Bestial psyche hungry e'er. [1]

They thrill n' thrive
On
Feminine flesh live
Trample twin downy
Horizontal petals and
Buxom paired chrysanthemums.[2]

Lust for tender tunnel
Phallic effluvia
Bob to funnel. [3]

Cannibals say,
‘Vow rapers in
Savagery scale
Of cannibalism
[Read] ‘live'
Give you walkover! ! ' [4]

Freud marvels,
‘Bravo iconoclast ID
Deservingly you
Ruin, crap, pee
On cruddy__civilization.[5]


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Glossary: Humbly given for what I tried to express: ~
[1] Bob: Move up and down repeatedly
[2] Phallic: Relating to a phallus [male organ of copulation]
[3] Iconoclast: Someone who attacks cherished ideas.
[3]: ID [In Psychology]: Is the set of uncoordinated instinctual trends. The great reservoir of libido, eros. Acts according to the ‘pleasure principle' needs immediate satisfaction. No morality, ANIMALISTIC..

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sujeet Kumar Vishwakarma 27 February 2013

giving innate explanation in lyrical manner is only going to aggravate... you seem to be the kind that loves to open and keep fresh the injuries, for the world to know you are injured, instead of letting it heal morally and mentally. When souls be pledged to bad, and intentions, bent on presenting the evil. trust me its not the world around, but you, who's raising the devil. write something beautiful, for a change. Critically, Sujeet.

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Paul Mwenelupembe 28 February 2013

Wow! The best words to describe the whole scenes. Acts were really bad! ! ! Great write friend.

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Ruth Walters 06 January 2013

Rape is a most dreadful, cursed act of violence and if poetry can stem this flow, more power to you..... I was horrified by the recent rape and murder of this woman in India, it was cruelty beyond belief!

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Claude H Oliver Ii 06 January 2013

There are times when expressing anger and outrage are so appropriate. This is part of a long string of needed outrage to focus on the human response to feeling no power or responsibility for one's self as well as a total disconnection to other humanity. When we see ourselves in each other, this will become less a part of how we live. As usual, Niv, you go straight to the essence like a well distilled brandy. Thank you.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 27 February 2013

Thanks for raising your concern on the plight of women who are oppressed by men's macho and egoistic tendencies.

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Eman Obied 16 September 2013

powerfully experessed, .

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Dauda Muideen Lanre 15 September 2013

What a satirical poem to save woman from man like wolve; agony and suffering of womanhood

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Antimoni Dutta 03 June 2013

really an inhumanity took place in Delhi...................... and u strongly revealed your expression towards it

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Amitabha Bagchi 02 June 2013

======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Aswath Raman To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism Date-Time: 2/28/2013 7: 05: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Hey Niv! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Dear Nivedita! I wholeheartedly appreciate and support your fight against rape and assault against women. What about other suppressions? What about those girls who are beaten by Taliban in south east Afghan provinces and Western Pakistan for going to school? What about Rizana Nafeek who was beheaded for allegedly (No solid proof) killing a baby in KSA? What about Lama al-ghamdi,5 year old, who was beaten to death by her father because he suspected her virginity? What about Pragaash, an all girl band in Kashmir, which was banned after a religious pronouncement? Just sharing my concerns! Your Fan Aswath Raman === Posted thru kindness of AB London

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Antonio Liao 14 May 2013

oh! GOD for every tears that fall savage my flesh, hate my heart and hold my breath... the enmity makes me the same as a barbarian of no hope yet! the wind touches your lines of Hope to survive and fight to the last of the sweat coated dream of Peace.... you inspired me my Friend thank you....God bless a 10/10

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