Per. Nig.


Carpenter Thoughts - Poem by Per. Nig.

Hugging her knees
Sat on the floor
A melancholic smile
She wore

Her eyes were tinged red
In the bosom of the gore
Down the cheeks
Her tears tore

Carpenter thoughts
Into her heart bore
Holes of sadness
Depression and sore

Where the heaven is?
In the embrace of the shore
Just keep open
The hope and faith's door

5/20/2012


Comments about Carpenter Thoughts by Per. Nig.

  • (9/24/2012 8:25:00 AM)


    A very beautiful poem with rare blends of diction, lyrical charm and what not.. (Report) Reply

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/9/2012 10:27:00 AM)


    very nice words depicted here (Report) Reply

  • (7/6/2012 9:51:00 AM)


    Just keep open
    The hope and faith's door
    ..........................................................
    Hi, nice words, Amir,
    best wishes,
    Ts.
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2012 5:08:00 AM)


    Awesome, I read some of your poems, they are full of sense. I Love them.
    I'm speachless...very good :)
    (Report) Reply

  • Ekaterina M. Polischuk (6/17/2012 4:47:00 AM)


    sadness in poems is sadness in life... it`s an awful way... i know... during last three months i was in depression, i felt myself dead and lost reasons to live. but today i rise for myself, for my angels and people need and love me... be open... and meet sadness just in poems :) (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (6/15/2012 3:12:00 PM)


    Just keep open
    The hope and faith's door....

    Seeing into within
    Haste swoons to wrest
    Wishes defrayed
    Ebb awaits to shore...wonderful write by imagery and metaphor,
    (Report) Reply

  • Kasia Fedyk (6/5/2012 2:40:00 PM)


    So beautiful, I can feel the whole poem moving through me. Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • (5/22/2012 6:29:00 AM)


    that gave me a great feeling after not being here for such a long time
    awesome job
    rrrrrrreally interesting to me
    thanQ
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 20, 2012



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