Carpet Of Light Poem by Ranjit Ravindran

Carpet Of Light

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A carpet of light blinking at random,
Spreads silently in freedom;
The darkness around deepened the glow,
Unfettered it continued to flow,
Over the hedges and the fences.

The carpet seamlessly expanded,
With drops of light assembling;
A bead from east, a bead from west,
All trying to bond with the best!

That fluorescent organic glitter,
Made my heart flutter,
Promising a life better!

Anjali Sinha 09 November 2009

now what is this carpet of light is it knowledge is it faith in god is it love? whatever, it was always there one has to only introspect to be lead towards it a powerful poem seeking introspection -10 anjali

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Nivrutti Avhad 08 November 2009

a very beautiful poem with nice imagination

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Mamta Agarwal 08 November 2009

i can see here you are in a meditative state to percieve this carpet of light, beautiful imagery interwoven skillfully. thanks Ranjit Mamta

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Vijay Menon 07 November 2009

a poem truly written by an engineer fine write

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Priyanka Bhowmick 06 November 2009

dats a divine light which brings joy n happiness in the minds if ppl... very well scripted words... fine wrtten.. thanx

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Budlea Ní Mhaolfhábhail 13 January 2010

loved it, simply loved your capturing of sunlight/darkness, the spreading glow that warns the soul, light enveloping the soul! ! ! Lovely...keep writing...Ruth: -)

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Diane Violet 25 November 2009

Extraordinary is this carpet of light...revelation, AHA've captured it well!

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Rani Turton 14 November 2009

Light and darkness, two extremes that fascinate. Light often brings security but darkness can bring peace. I can see that your work does reflect this fascination.

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Brishti Mazumdar 09 November 2009

The darkness around deepened the glow, ... ...liked your writing....your thought process.....

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 09 November 2009

a fantastic piece of work.

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