A carpet of light blinking at random,
Spreads silently in freedom;
The darkness around deepened the glow,
Unfettered it continued to flow,
Over the hedges and the fences.
The carpet seamlessly expanded,
With drops of light assembling;
A bead from east, a bead from west,
All trying to bond with the best!
That fluorescent organic glitter,
Made my heart flutter,
Promising a life better!
i can see here you are in a meditative state to percieve this carpet of light, beautiful imagery interwoven skillfully. thanks Ranjit Mamta
dats a divine light which brings joy n happiness in the minds if ppl... very well scripted words... fine wrtten.. thanx
loved it, simply loved your capturing of sunlight/darkness, the spreading glow that warns the soul, light enveloping the soul! ! ! Lovely...keep writing...Ruth: -)
Extraordinary is this carpet of light...revelation, AHA moment...you've captured it well!
Light and darkness, two extremes that fascinate. Light often brings security but darkness can bring peace. I can see that your work does reflect this fascination.
The darkness around deepened the glow, ... ...liked your writing....your thought process.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
now what is this carpet of light is it knowledge is it faith in god is it love? whatever, it was always there one has to only introspect to be lead towards it a powerful poem seeking introspection -10 anjali