changes in the warmth of the soil
from spring to summer to autumn to winter
changes in the fall of rain
from warm and pattering to cold and slashing
changes in the sunlight
from falling through the leaves to tracing patterns on our skin to fading to grey
.
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change has been in the wind
for a long long time now
.
.
and now I see
change is in you
change is in the silence between us
if you stay, I will stay with you
if you stray, I will leave you
......even if I stay
.
.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ © 2019 Susan Williams.
Read recently.. In a world of so many broken hearts, May our souls share the compassion of Jesus! .. This world so needs! .. May God dear
If I could rate again, Definitely another 5 Stars! ..+++++
A powerfully moving poem that touches the heart and soul ever so! .. And is ever so beautifully expressed! ..
Hi Susie, How you strike an analogy between changes happening in climatic conditions, in the weather patterns and the changes in human relations.Wonderful poem.
Valsa! ! ! ! I love it when you come and comment on a poem of mine and turn that intelligent mind loose on it! ! ! You make me feel good, girl
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There is an echo of genuine sadness here. A beautiful poem which touches the heart.
Tom- - -having a dickens if a time replying to comments- -appreciate your comments but must type in a hurry before I am cut off- -I agree- life is nothing but change! Thank you for kind comment