Chasing Rainbows Comments

i am looking for a poem about how rainbows make people feel

Great poem man! By the way please read my poems and comment abou them as i don't have much experience

Sad piece here.....but I know you'll never be forgotten: O)

This is such a great poem filled with profound thoughts! I mean how true is it that if we keep doing the same thing we can not expect to get something different...yet we continue on the same path over and over even when we know we are not happy where it leads! ? Great title and imagery..a very well writen piece by a very intelligent and talented poet. Have a Great day and thanx 4 sharing. =Shelley=

A warm message sent through poetry. Thanks for sharing David. I gave you a ten. I have rainbow poems too. Im a rainbowholic! Will be back.Lisa

And yet, you seem to be found in some way through your expressive lines Brillliant expressive writing from you again David All the best Love duncan X

ey david! i dont know about you..but I definently chase rainbows lol. Another great poem. I give this one a 9.8

David I love this poem. I think I've been chasing rainbows all my life. I love to read you poems because they touch my heart everytime. Thanks for sharing them Hugs Pam

To the nowhere end, now that could spark me with lots of thoughts. I suppose most of chase rainbows. Lovely poem David nice lines. Bob

It's easy to dwell in the old days when the present is unfulfilling. But as long as you keep moving forward, that's also part of the journey, and I doubt that you will 'arrive' forgotten. Every life you touch along the way is changed by that moment in some way. Nice piece of work, David - I know the feeling. Linda

An intensely appealing piece - for its honesty, its whimsy and its pleasing structure. I'm glad the spark of passion continues to burn in your soul and I love your particular brand of gentle humour too. Lovely poem. Warmly, Allie xxxx

Just because, on balance we fancy the idea of being on the hamster wheel a little more than we do the reality of being off it, is my explanation! Why are you writing my story by the way? ? I feel at home in this one. I'd rather I didn't, but that's the way it is. Some universal truths captured here I suspect David. A very fine poem sir. jim

Very fine craftwork, David...I HAVE FOUND, IN MY OWN PRIVATE WORLD, THAT WHETHER OR NOT TERES ALWAYS ANEW LOVE TO REPLACE AN OLD LOVE, CAN BE QUELLED IF YOU HAVE YOUR DREAMS & IMAGES & IF YOU HAVE BEEN GIFTED TO BE ONE OF THSE FEW WHO CAN WRITE ABOUT IT &RELEASE THAT VOID TIL LOVE COMES ONCE AGAIN.YOU HAVE THAT GIFT, MY NFRIEND...EMBELLISH IN IT! F. j. R.

I just llve this, David: 'To the no where end Where I’ll be forgotten' Especially your 'no where end' Good feeling here. Keep up the good work. alicia

Oh, this is a pessimistic one, David! Sounds like the writer just wants to curl up and die! I'm sure this isn't happening to you..... but it's cleverly written. Love, Fran xx

Chasing our dreams, even old ones... i know i chase mine everyday, life is sweeter that way... i loved this poem david...10