Dear me,
where did i lose you?
And where shall I find you?
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I do see that childhood / but all scattered, just like the scattered sand / I used to play with.... Immaculate style and an amazing portrayal of childhood phase of life which has become a part of history.
Great poem about childhood which is nothing but a bunch of memories in the corridor of life. This is a wonderful poem indeed. Thanks, Maida. where did i lose you? .... And where shall I find you? That innocence.... That merry-making,
thank you sir... when God blesses a teacher and guide like you... everything is possible....thank you sir...#ashraf sir...
I do see a versatile poetess in you keep enthralling us and keep dazzling my dear you are absolutely genius you have the ability to touch the skies.May Allah bless you.
I do see that childhood, but all scattered, just like the scattered sand, I used to play with. painful memories recollected and well set in powerful words. thank you dear poet. tony
thank you to everyone.....for your time... considering it worth reading...... ....looking forward to put all my efforts next time.....thank you...
A beautiful poem, very impressive, a very good selection as members poem of the day, congrats.
Hi Maida, Very nice to see you on ph. Congrats on being selected poet of the day. Especially, for this beautiful poem on childhood, nostalgia... Loved reading... Looking forward for more.. 100++
Dear me, where did i loose you? And where shall I find you? A poignant song of childhood reflection.
Do you mean lose rather than loose? Otherwise a very fine poem. Hope to read more of your poems.
Scattered thoughts engrossing the difficult perspective of an eye (I) viewing itself.
a poem of memories and feelings somewhere lost in a distant land? .............wonderfully written
Unique style of presentation..... Smooth and spontaneous... Deserves the position as MPOTD..... congratulations.... Keep penning.
A beautiful poem. The sweet memories of childhood recollected in a wistful mood. Congrats.
Scattered sand..... congrats on being chosen.... a highest 10++++++
As a child I felt myself to be alone, and I am still, because I know things and must hint at things which others apparently know nothing of, and for the most part do not want to know