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Chitchat Under 20

Rating: 5.0

It is important 2 talk 2 ur self about ur self 2 know ur self
Omar ibrahim shared a great part of the poem
It is a duet with omar ibrahim.

i love who loves me&who i don't know as long as he didn't hurt me
i miss my grandpa who died in the war, i heard he was clever&kind
i miss my friends as they r always in my mind
really i put them in my family tree

I'm ambitious I want 2 do sth. Extraordinary & great
Sth that will improve the earth's fate
the circumstances r strangling the dream however,
But hope floats on the heart's stream

I imagine what will khofo do if he visited Egypt today
& what will be the excuse we'll say? !
With Egypt started the history
&helping her recover is our destiny
I think of my father, I think of my mother
they raised, they fed & they gave me a brother
they gave me a bed where I can rest & sleep
I finish my food, they give me another

I'm not a child asking for a toy
All what I need is some peace & joy
A friend that suits a well bred boy
Who his friend left him & went 2 troy

Sameera Sameer 02 September 2009

it's wonderful! &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&i loved it so

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 September 2009

i want to chit chat so so bad even we have not met but no sweat the thril is all I want, you bet

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 September 2009

bravo! ! nice creative/innovative effort! loved it! 10+

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 01 September 2009

nice rhymes and beautiful poem.................a good write..........

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Doha Ewiess 01 September 2009

nice poem...creative...and interesting and really really meaningfull :) ...great work for you both! !

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Nooruddeen Mm 06 October 2009

Very Simple, excellent, good flow... Congratulations Rgds Nooruddeen

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Anthony Edmond John 09 September 2009

Sweetheart Your writing is more refined.. I love this cheers. The Sage

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smart girl eh.. nice poetry

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Honest Heart 05 September 2009

Yay! ! ! ! ! ! ! .......I love this master piece a loooooooooot....I hope you can see mine :)

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Kobik William 03 September 2009

simple poem with tender words.Keep this up and you'll be g8er than WILLIAM himself.

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