City-Bus Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq
City-Bus
City-bus is crawling one zone to another
Someone is recalling somebody silently
Entering into the dustless cool mall
I may dare to tell all the senior ladies love
May open the cellular phone.
Yellow champak smelling the teen-age
Passerby may suffer from unknown blunder
It's really an untold epic
Somebody feels someone
I may redesign my attributes
May write some lines on the corpuscles.
City-bus is entering into the yesterdays
Yellow neon-evening is moving from tomorrows
I may fall down to the stoppage
May kiss the air might touch your lips someday.
City-bus can't cross the globe
Can't find your cyber destination!
Poem 05
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X
Loved this one going nowhere slowly, means time to think, time to hope and time to dream. Bob
Conscious of time and possibility you write with deceptive depth.. nice work.
Ashraful, Interesting poems... Also it is perfectly written. The dream 'the noble has put' for the poet. But I would prefer mine the old car... Or on foot... From me 10... Tsira
A lovely poem.............10++++ Thanks for your nice comments on my poem Who Am I?
City-bus can’t cross the globe Can’t find your cyber destination! So true, dear....My journey thru your City Bus was enjoyable...10+...Brishti
The title caught me. I knew it was different and modern. Different in theme, different in thoughts, I could say this is based on an experience while daydreaming. Haha, I'm not sure.; p This is inspiring, I'll write something like this.
You describe a very vivid and powerful scene. It leaves me in a bit of a quandary.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/3/2024 1:25:39 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Well Ashraful, Citybus does have its limitations.But still, here you are able to conjour such fleeting urban imagery.