Whew!
After what seems like an eternity
Of avoiding our issues...
We've finally had that 'talk' today
And now the air seems clearer
Facts were stated...
Straight and true
With very little feeling
The honesty between us...
Was certainly revealing
I can breathe a little easier now...
The air is looking clearer
The fog has lifted...
Winds have changed
And peace of mind is nearer
Dee Daffodil (HW) 11 April,2008
Dee, Short and to the point, great writing is like that, make no mistake this one is great, ... now what? B.V.A.
Nothing like thrashing it out... even if it doesn't bring the answers one might hope. Analogy well carried through dee. t x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Dee. its always good to clear the air I feel and you've done it very well with this one. Regards Dave T 10/10