Dee Daffodil


Clearing The Air - Poem by Dee Daffodil

Whew!
After what seems like an eternity
Of avoiding our issues...
We've finally had that 'talk' today
And now the air seems clearer

Facts were stated...
Straight and true
With very little feeling
The honesty between us...
Was certainly revealing

I can breathe a little easier now...
The air is looking clearer
The fog has lifted...
Winds have changed
And peace of mind is nearer

Dee Daffodil (HW) 11 April,2008


Comments about Clearing The Air by Dee Daffodil

  • David Threadgold (10/11/2008 10:32:00 AM)


    Hi Dee. its always good to clear the air I feel and you've done it very well with this one. Regards Dave T 10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • (4/19/2008 5:41:00 AM)


    Dee,

    Short and to the point,
    great writing is like that,
    make no mistake this one is great,
    ... now what?

    B.V.A.
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  • (4/13/2008 6:35:00 AM)


    Nothing like thrashing it out... even if it doesn't bring the answers one might hope. Analogy well carried through dee. t x (Report) Reply

  • (4/11/2008 11:00:00 PM)


    It sure beats one of those plug in air fresheners doesn't it? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 11, 2008



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