Speak not of love from lips but heart
singing souls i have seen them depart
and leave of love seldom a trace
so carefull with what you embrace
vows from tongue how often breaks
in time gets lost like melting flakes
and the flattering tongue how comely greets
but in silence, there is no deceit
so speak to me in words but few
because they cease to be like morning dew
but like a beckoning of a warm sunrise
the void of silence never lies
but in silence, there is no deceit.....Silence does not lie.......... very good poem on love and its problems and fineness. tony
Well conceived and elegantly crafted with artistic brilliance. Beautiful love poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Kanav and do remain enriched.
A refined poetic imagination, Kanav. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
(cont.) you seem to be heavily-promoting silence. hmm? i know someone 'close to me' who often wishes i were/was silent! and as for few words being preferred, i like these few, which i sometimes hear about now: Dinner time i've gotta run! thanks for sharing. it is good to see some new poems from you. bri ;)
do you guys over THERE spell careful with 2 L's usually? vows from tongue how often breaks in time gets lost like melting flakes and the flattering tongue how comely greets but in silence, there is no deceit i liked 1st 2 lines especially; last two i did not understand. is there...................supposed to be a period after greets? (cont)
In silence, there is no deceit.... Lovely poem with a nice message. keep writting Kanav you back ph after a long break
Words can be so hollow! Loud proclamations of love often cool down into empty nothingness! When heart is full with love, words are few! Well conceived thoughts put into free flowing verse!
The array of words, fit with emotions in between and the flow of the narration make me think its is a heartfelt, maybe close from your heart or maybe close inspiration. Beautiful
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A lovely poem... Keep it up... You may like to read my poem and express your views too.. Naila