Cloaked Love Poem by kanav justa

Cloaked Love

Rating: 5.0


Speak not of love from lips but heart
singing souls i have seen them depart
and leave of love seldom a trace
so carefull with what you embrace

vows from tongue how often breaks
in time gets lost like melting flakes
and the flattering tongue how comely greets
but in silence, there is no deceit

so speak to me in words but few
because they cease to be like morning dew
but like a beckoning of a warm sunrise
the void of silence never lies

Sunday, July 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naila Rais 01 July 2018

A lovely poem... Keep it up... You may like to read my poem and express your views too.. Naila

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 July 2018

but in silence, there is no deceit.....Silence does not lie.......... very good poem on love and its problems and fineness. tony

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Chinedu Dike 01 July 2018

Well conceived and elegantly crafted with artistic brilliance. Beautiful love poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Kanav and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 July 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Kanav. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Bri Edwards 09 September 2018

(cont.) you seem to be heavily-promoting silence. hmm? i know someone 'close to me' who often wishes i were/was silent! and as for few words being preferred, i like these few, which i sometimes hear about now: Dinner time i've gotta run! thanks for sharing. it is good to see some new poems from you. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 09 September 2018

do you guys over THERE spell careful with 2 L's usually? vows from tongue how often breaks in time gets lost like melting flakes and the flattering tongue how comely greets but in silence, there is no deceit i liked 1st 2 lines especially; last two i did not understand. is there...................supposed to be a period after greets? (cont)

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Ruby Mostazir 05 September 2018

In silence, there is no deceit.... Lovely poem with a nice message. keep writting Kanav you back ph after a long break

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Valsa George 02 September 2018

Words can be so hollow! Loud proclamations of love often cool down into empty nothingness! When heart is full with love, words are few! Well conceived thoughts put into free flowing verse!

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Unwritten Soul 24 August 2018

The array of words, fit with emotions in between and the flow of the narration make me think its is a heartfelt, maybe close from your heart or maybe close inspiration. Beautiful

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