Close the door when you leave,
place a barrier between our hearts.
This night
I shall be alone –
without tears, without regret.
Close the door when you leave,
pull it tight
and turn the key.
I shall soon forget -
you and I
were never meant to be.
A delightful love poem. Love lost is never easy, early acceptance can be a blessing though.
More powerful than a lightening bolt. Went right trough me. I stand in awe of what you can do with words and feelings.Can't say anymore, stunned
Acceptance and rejection... two opposing mental features! But there is no absolute verity for them! Those once rejected also can bombard back to life! So not yet time to pull the door tight! (am not serious.......) Nicely put, Val
An arrow that shoots straight to the heart of the matter. I must say Val this one is short and to the point. Why beat around the bush when it comes to love. If love has died or can no longer flourish why try to bring it back to life? A very distinct and poignant write. Bold and beautiful.
an eye opener f r the many devastated young ones. So true, Val, If it was not meant to be, why remain in the illusion of passion.
Closing the door on a feeling that didn't end up being love.............brilliant write. Not really much else to say, other than that it really is wonderful. -W
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice, short and sweet, a love not lost just a love not to be