Close your eyes
Don't think
If you do
Think only of you
What you want
What you need
What you don't want
How you will succeed
Close your eyes
Clear your head
Too much going on
Too much being said
Close your eyes
Find who you are
Walk your own way
No matter how far
Close your eyes
See what is wrong
You can make a change
It doesn't have to take long
Close your eyes
Fight the pain
OPEN your eyes
Get off that train
The train ride that
You see so wrong
The train where
You don't belong
So with open eyes
And open heart
Leave the train
For a NEW start
ALL ABOARD FOR A WHOLE NEW CHANGE
Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL
Great wisdom all we need is courage to make a stand and live our own way! A trail blazing read!
Look within closing your external eyes and find your own requirements. Open your eyes to exhibit the courage to discard and give up something that won't suit you or do you any good! Make a fresh start! Great wisdom expressed in these lines! !
An elevating well written and conceived poem to encourage and inspire others. With a hopeful message to awaken all and see their true sense of worth. And where it can deliver them. Five stars and remain poetry and morally blessed. Thank you for sharing your most constructive poem. Take care and quite simply enjoy life.
Close your eyes Clear your head Too much going on Too much being said Close your eyes Find who you are. Great advices indeed. all these you write are born from your own experience. thank you dear poetess Lyn
I did too, but would have done it a lot sooner had I read this first......I think we are all guilty of being scared of the dark from time to time but yes there is light at the end of the tunnel, just keep walking towards it. NN
A moving meditation for a beautiful new beginning. Well done my friend!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Train analogy is well-presented, while in recital it is like the galloping sound of the rhythmic beats...! ! !