Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette (Poetry Hell, Vermont)

Poems by Chuck Audette : 40 / 163

Coming To My Senses... - Poem by Chuck Audette

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I'll swear I never felt her
in the soft touch of a clover
brush my legs so sweetly
as I look our field over.

I'll claim I haven't heard her
whispering my name
in this lovely hidden meadow
witness to my shame

I'll say that I can't smell her
as the autumn leaves decay
and know not of the bed
where forever she will lay

the grass is always greener
on a certain patch of ground
but I'll claim I haven't seen her
if her body's ever found...

Chuck Audette

Poems by Chuck Audette : 40 / 163

Gone Away (3/4/2010 5:48:00 PM)

Creepy and clever! you always pack a punch in your last lines. (Report) Reply
Patti Masterman (10/22/2009 11:11:00 AM)

At first it seemed like a love poem but I had been forewarned of the 'halloweenish' vibes, lol. Ending seemed like a resounding thump on the head (but I liked it..I liked it, lol) (Report) Reply
Shirley Woods (7/27/2009 4:21:00 PM)

This is great! We are still laughing. Best wishes (Report) Reply
Kimberly Farias (6/30/2008 1:30:00 AM)

Ahhh, your poems never cease to amaze me! I have to admit, I am a bit jealous that your poems always seem to come out exactly right. They are such a pleasure to read. Also, Thanks for your recent comment! I've been PIMming again, too. (Report) Reply
Barry Van Allen (4/18/2007 1:37:00 AM)

Charles,
Did you notice how I got back to 'Charles' , real quick!
... Please tell the policemen that you and I have not ever really met!
I just like your writings, at least right up to that point!
I know that you are joking! ... Say that you are joking! ... Please! ! ! ?

B.V.A. (Report) Reply
Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler (3/14/2007 8:18:00 AM)

i literally laughed out loud at this one. Chuck, you do good work.

Jake (Report) Reply
glen still (11/7/2006 5:09:00 PM)

amazing ending..what a lead up...u sure your not a series write out in LA? (Report) Reply
Goldy Locks (9/10/2006 7:21:00 AM)

this was sexy. at first. then i read on.. & well, the morbidity kicked in and it became
a delectably intriguing piece of work, Chuck. good stuff. (Report) Reply
jack russell (9/8/2006 7:58:00 AM)

This is VERY dark, Chuck...hope it's just your muse speaking...or do I call the cops? Bittersweet/Sweetbitter...loved it :)
Jack... (Report) Reply
Dee Daffodil (5/2/2006 11:23:00 AM)

Chuck,
Hmmmm...me thinks the meadow may have been freshly planted! I like this a lot...it catches you off guard (ok...and scares the crap out of ya too! !) . I love the shocking ending!
Hugs,
Dee (Report) Reply
R H (4/15/2006 12:35:00 PM)

A real tale of the unexpected...this is one that deserves that second read to fully appreciate the subtle but sinister tone. Excellent write. Justine. (Report) Reply
Jerzegirl *~~ (3/24/2006 3:19:00 PM)

you know, you keep us coming back for more :) (Report) Reply
Esther Leclerc (3/8/2006 11:21:00 AM)

Haunting and almost elegiac, to me. Good stuff, this... (Report) Reply
Dan Tharp (3/6/2006 10:24:00 PM)

typo alert! ...3rd verse...1st line... lose the 'I' before 'that'...

dan =) (Report) Reply
Duncan Wyllie (1/31/2006 5:26:00 PM)

What a turn around.Expect the unexpected.
Loads of tallent here!
Love Duncan (Report) Reply
Lea Simpson (1/18/2006 6:09:00 PM)

Great storytelling! Your words really tease the reader. Lovely. Very lovely indeed. (Report) Reply
Chuck Audette (10/13/2005 10:24:00 AM)

Trying to create some creepy Halloween poems... What do you think? - chuck (Report) Reply