And when the sun
talks to sky…saying
“Sky, will you please grant my wish? ”
send me the warmth of her love
for 3 hours
or maybe 2 hours
or even one...
sky says
“your wishes are granted sun”
you can have her
the longest hour you mentioned first…
and the lunar eclipse occur in the sky june 26/10…
Ho, such a romantic Idea brings the big to my nail-top! Beautiful.....Beautiful. Feel the sun like me also. You have done...what I can't express.....but done it. Cosmic world is no more alien from my inner world. A tie you have weaved by the words. I have not read before such a poem playing with so vast and living canvass where heavenly objects are like me and my surroundings. In truest sense you have personify the sun and sky like the lovers of our known society. Perfect synchronization of lunar eclipse. Give us more poet.....give us more...... Regards, 10++++++ Apoet Bangla
'Celestial romance By terrestrial In note ethereal’ ~ niv Poet Lady Ma’am I’m eclipsed in your separate format of lolol… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Cosmic conversation...A wonderful little poem indeed! ; D
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful poem written in a cute fashion.