Cosmogony Poem by Jacqui Broad

Cosmogony

Rating: 5.0


You say, you like sun to shine on your face.
I say, grey and rain, suits my mood just fine.
I don't really care, if there's a sun to shine,
It's by you, whom I am fascinated and amaze'.
Your feelings a mystery - after all that we've been through.
Sometimes it feels like that there are dark forces surrounding us.
You say, you think I am crazy, and going nuts!
But I just feel lucky, that I still have you.
So, shall we rather talk then, about the good things?
Like when you kissed me, taking me by total surprise,
And bared your love, like I didn't expect you to.
Or, shall we rather discuss the fact my blood sings?
Before, you always left me in the dark to surmise -
After all that's happened, I know now what to do...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 03 November 2011

Hello jacqui, Countries has limitation just like we have temptations. Yet imagination is also nation but without any geographical or time limit! The way wrote was delighting but it seems you love does run smooth! ha! This time many smiles for you :) 'I don't really care, if there's a sun to shine, It's by you, whom I am fascinated and amaze'.' Your poetic words are attracting, your romantic language fascinating. A-z Your poems are scintillation in the life of oscillating you are king! ha! ha! ha!

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Unwritten Soul 27 October 2011

Sweet..and i love the title, it was a good choice as it describe your poem very well...sun and rain..wow i like it very much _Unwritten Soul

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