Craziness I'm Wayward Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Craziness I'm Wayward

Rating: 4.3


O Dear I read you as Love without knowing true
I refine you many times as my God in my thoughtful vow
Here I'm still alone in the path of rosy thorn
look- I've accomplished everything with my heart colors
the race ofriver with its concentration towards the ocean
the firing sunlight with the icy moonlight
the golden sunrise with the silver sunset
the tranquil dawn with the greasy dusk
the handcrafted noon with the embroidered afternoon
the dreamy night with the contemplated darkness
the yearning day with a lot of learning chapter of nature
the daily life making intimacy with the imaginative desire
the far flowery stars with the deep silence of the space
the endless galaxy paths with its greatest journey

O dear I embedded these everything for our unity
Our dishevelled caravan on the path of almighty

O dear in me craziness
I'm still wayward trace
I find everything everyday within love sublime
I live with my loneliness, it's opined me fine
The decorated rainbow abridging to your line
In me life and death double sim card is activated
But still don't know who is love or God in my debate

13.04.2020 Chattogram

Saturday, April 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,self discovery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 24 April 2020

This is incredibly beautiful. It has authentic ring and personal voice. What flashes from its core challenges anyone to bring forth something equal.. It leaves suburban tinsel-mongering in the dust. Its playfulness cannot be contained in word games, yet no one else could think of such word combinations. It has made tremendous strides in three years. Now the gardener dusts off his hands nonchalantly. Even one who strolls through a few corners of his garden would receive a whole education.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 April 2020

Golden Sunrise! ! ! True love is the key; Musing along with the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Roberto Woolworth 20 April 2020

What you write is ancient and modern. How can you compare life and death to a sim card? Are you joking or hallucinating after an Lsd shot?

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 April 2020

I'm still wayward trace I find everything everyday within love sublime I live with my loneliness, it's opined me fine The decorated rainbow abridging to your line. the loneliness that a poet experience makes him think and write more and more. so such a loneliness is a blessing for us. tony

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Akhtar Jawad 18 April 2020

Self discovery ends in love or ego in the other words.

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