Crazy Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Crazy

Rating: 3.6


I just can't take it...
My heart is racing.
Emotions keep spinning out.
I can't stop stuttering.
My lungs are refusing to work.
My brain is overwhelmed.
Your image is burned into my eyes.
Everything suddenly seems to be 10 times more amazing and has a new light to it.
It's as if a veil that was covering the good in the world was lifted..
By you.
Your name is constantly flowing from my tongue.
My thoughts are erratic and jumbled.
...And I love every minute of it. 3

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 27 August 2011

Beauty, clearly radiates through this fantastic write that astoundingly move me! The very essence of Poetry has touched you wonderfully! 10+++ well deserved! Keep it up! This is just the beginning for you and it already tastes good! Keep it up! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! Love and Peace for always! Rome from NYC....

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Amber S 27 August 2011

love this poem it is really good. keep writing! ! ! :) -Amber

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Sounds like puppy love! How sweet! ! [3

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Hazel Durham 22 September 2012

Wonderful, great expression of deep and powerful emotions! Great write keep up the good work!

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Terry O'leary 25 June 2012

Emotions expressed well... Terry

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Walter Miring'u Nyagah 23 June 2012

Wow! ! ! Go for it...Ur talented!

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Muneerah Abdulrahman 18 June 2012

I love the flow of words. It's sure a really good piece.

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