Crimson Poem by Arielle Friese

Crimson

Rating: 4.6


The color of crimson
covers my wrist
as I sit and try to stop it

Why wont it stop did
I slice to deep?
did I hit a vein?

I must have because
my floor is coverd in blood
the room is spinning out
and I am going cold.

The last thing i hear before i went limp
was my moms voice saying why did
she do this to her self

and she doesnt know i di it because of her

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dj Hart 20 January 2012

A deeply thought poem. Well written. Excellent.

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 12 January 2012

Wow, it sure does elicit a powerful response.

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Devon McElveen 20 December 2011

This poem had me thinking, very powerful

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Chance 20 December 2011

Like....typos though

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Hope Anderson 16 December 2011

WoW this is a nice poem, but i just hope u stop cutting yourself thats really not a way to solve your problems even tho I.....but it's a good poem

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Star Crossed Lady 31 January 2013

beautifully written. perfectly said.

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~Deana ~ Dotterweich 08 February 2012

Wow such powerful emotions i like :)

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Bonnie Lundgren 05 February 2012

Pain doesn't leave when you hate it Hurt you can control is an illusion Because it always owns you in the end Love is patient, love is kind... He always protects, always hopes, Always perserveres. Love never fails. Prayers for your mom to see What's really going on in you

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Misses Unknown 30 January 2012

i love this poem so much emotion well done keep up the good work

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Lavion Bell 30 January 2012

will writen poem you have real skill put this in a contest because you would win

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