Cruel World Poem by Practicing Poetess

Cruel World

Rating: 5.0


How can the earth keep spinning
As always, again and again?
Can't it pause, just for a moment
In acknowledgement of his pain?

How dare the holiday shoppers
Be oblivious to his cries
And carry on, as usual
After his sister dies?

Why is the world so normal
When time, for him, stands still?
It seems so cold and callous
Devoid of all good will.

For him, a defining moment
That forever alters his life.
For the world, it's business as usual
Cold and cruel as the blade of a knife.


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Thursday, December 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death,grief,pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written for someone special, lost in grief during the holiday season.

The merriness of others
Is like salt in a wound
To one who suffers alone with grief
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 18 December 2019

You present a realist vision of the world, which can be impersonal and uncaring about personal tragedies. I have often had similar thoughts about this. I have trained myself to be less sensitive (if possible) .

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Practicing Poetess 19 December 2019

Michael, as poets we never want to lose our sensitivity, because that is an element that enables us to compose touching and lovely poems that stir souls and move people. But it's a delicate line to walk, in maintaining that balance between sensitivity, and developing a thick skin so as not to be overly offended by every little thing. " If possible" is spot-on, when it comes to poets. Good comment.

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Kim Barney 05 December 2019

Very well done, Poetess. Good rhyme and meter, and full of feeling.

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Practicing Poetess 05 December 2019

Thanks, Kim, Good to hear from you! : -)

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Practicing Poetess 05 December 2019

Thank you, Carl. Perhaps it's because this one is true.: -)

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Carl Roussell 05 December 2019

You can feel the loss in your poem. Well written.

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Practicing Poetess 05 December 2019

Thank you, Carl. Perhaps it's because this one is true. : -)

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