Curly Hair Poem by Practicing Poetess

Curly Hair

Rating: 4.5


Curly hair,
Not a care.
Falls asleep
At Daddy's feet
In her arms,
Teddy Bear.
Little one,
Sucking thumb.
Off to bed,
Sleepy head.
Bright moon beams,
Pleasant dreams.


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Sunday, November 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poem written Sep't.4,2020
My objective was to paint a descriptive picture in as few words as possible.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 21 November 2020

A well written poem. Truly delightful—- 5 stars*****

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Practicing Poetess 24 November 2020

Thank you for your appreciation, Bernard!

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Aqua Flower 20 November 2020

I have this wonderful picture of a sweet baby girl with curly hair, sucking thumb and the innocence of the young. Wondefully written Practicing Poetess!

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Practicing Poetess 20 November 2020

A poem to tug at a mother's hearstrings. Thank you, Aqua!

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Quoth Theraven 07 November 2020

Very nice poem with Teddy Bear, batteries, and curls included. QtR

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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2020

'Off to bed, Sleepy head. Bright moon beams, Pleasant dreams.' - The poem ends so beautifully! Thanks for the 'Poet's Notes'. 'My objective was to paint a descriptive picture in as few words as possible' - you have been quite successful in doing that, you have achieved your objective.

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Practicing Poetess 07 November 2020

Thank you very much, Khairul. What a lovely comment!

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