Love On Mars: (Love At First Blip) Poem by Practicing Poetess

Love On Mars: (Love At First Blip)

Rating: 4.9

People speak of love at first sight
With Vampires, it's love at first bite
But what's it like, beyond the stars,
To fall in love on planet Mars?

Across the craters, he spots her
As they approach, they start to whirr
Antennas tangle (they have no lips)
For Martians, it's love at first blip!

Monday, July 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: couple,fantasy fiction,humour,love,mars,nonsense
So much for the limited possibilities theory, refuted once again!

Ha ha ha! ! ! Very funny!

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Tehani The Poet 14 May 2019

Great poem, short, punchy, to the point!

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M Asim Nehal 19 November 2018

Great fantasy with fantastic imagery.

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Practicing Poetess 19 November 2018

Thank you, Mohammed! I had such fun writing this one!

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Bipasha D 20 February 2018

Highly imaginative, funny and simply fascinating.

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Practicing Poetess 20 February 2018

Thank you, dear Bipasha. Poems like this are such fun to write, as well as to read!

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Chinedu Dike 12 January 2018

A work of active imagination, well articulated and nicely encapsulated with a tinge of humour. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing Poetess.

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Practicing Poetess 21 January 2018

Chinedu, I'd be hard-pressed to choose which makes for better poetry- - an active imagination, or real-life inspiration. I suppose that both have their place. I had fun writing this one! :)

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Lamar Cole 18 December 2017

This is a very creative poem about love on Mars.

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Practicing Poetess 18 December 2017

A very FUNNY poem about love on Mars! It made most everyone laugh. The pictures that I get in my mind when I read my poem are of creatures similar to Marvin the Martian of Looney Toons (Bugs Bunny) fame, or perhaps like Disney's Wall-E, from the film.

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