Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 125,893 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Cuntry Girl.. [ Farm Life; Procreation; S H O R T; Humorous? ; Typo? ] - Poem by Bri Edwards

She's up at dawn...to water, AND to hoe,
then takes her mid-morning break to GO …
to the hay mow to present her 'furrow' …
to "Farm Boy" who 'sows' in "Country Girl".

Nine months later it's her harvest time,
birthing twins [one of each].So sublime! !
That's how it goes on a fertile farm.
AND ‘they' married too, ...so there's no harm.


(August …24th …2018)

Topic(s) of this poem: baby, farmers, humorous, spelling


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I've done "my share" of 'farming'.Have YOU! ?

bri ;)

Comments about Cuntry Girl.. [ Farm Life; Procreation; S H O R T; Humorous? ; Typo? ] by Bri Edwards

  • Savita Tyagi (9/3/2018 4:01:00 PM)

    Isn’t it how it goes every where with some variation! An eternal song of procreation! Sowing and harvesting.....great combinations of words! (Report)Reply

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  • Valsa George (8/30/2018 6:52:00 AM)

    The farm boy and the 'cuntry girl' will make an ideal pair, sowing and harvesting...............! ! Your 'wicked brain' is always at work! (Report)Reply

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  • Kanav Justa (8/30/2018 1:49:00 AM)

    Hoe boey, I wish you would CUNTinue their love tale after their marriage (Report)Reply

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  • Kostas Lagos (8/25/2018 5:50:00 AM)

    A Bri's poem with a happy ending! Is there anything else I could ask for? (Report)Reply

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  • Paul Brookes (8/25/2018 2:25:00 AM)

    The analogy is fine The picture clear and the they wandered off and had many more children and all was well i loved this piece clever and amusing (Report)Reply

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  • B.m. Biswas (8/25/2018 1:39:00 AM)

    Nice, a true metaphysical one. (Report)Reply

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  • Jez Brul (8/25/2018 1:11:00 AM)

    and they lived happily ever after...nice one, sir Bri. 10++++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (8/24/2018 9:19:00 PM)

    Just to see - , . Now I try to sleep, .
    How bout you? : -)
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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 24, 2018



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