Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(d) 8 (Nature) Eagle Eyes - Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

Dark smouldering eyes
Shiver ran up my spine
Seething anger inside
His eyes looked straight into mine
Minutes stretching wide
So majestic and acquiline
Frozen to the core, my body numb
His body taut, ready to spring
If the glass had not been there, I would've succumbed
Giving me a last look, he soared up spreading his wings


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  • (1/29/2019 12:41:00 AM)

    Nice 😎 cool poem with nature (Report)Reply

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  • Bri Edwards (10/25/2017 7:04:00 PM)

    you were peering through an aviary window? ? i like it.

    :)

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  • (2/22/2007 11:56:00 PM)

    Awesome is a word to often bandied about carelessly - but in this instance a perfect description of this piece and it's magnificent subject. What a rare privilege you had to experience such a moment - and what a privilege for us that you have chosen to share it. Thanks. love Allie xxxx (Report)Reply

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  • (2/12/2007 5:46:00 AM)

    TO, how lucky you must've been to have that visitation. In red indian folklore the eagle is a most treasured bird. You captured the fear and the admiration very well here. HG: -) xx (Report)Reply

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  • (10/16/2006 1:34:00 AM)

    this is like a 'minute' captured and put in words, your fear, and his majesty very wll portrayed, liked it!

    Preets
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  • (10/15/2006 8:15:00 AM)

    Is it a poem or picture?

    For a moment I thought of bying this painting.

    Good work.
    Hope.
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/13/2006 1:12:00 PM)

    Felt as though i had been on the 8th floor, visiting, when this occured. Stellar
    detail & acute depiction.T.O.>>>You paint a picture like a true Artisan.
    '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
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  • (10/13/2006 9:02:00 AM)

    You have been blessed by the creature of freedom that came to visit you that day.
    Wonderful write!
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  • (10/13/2006 8:29:00 AM)

    life is a beautiful thing, when nature does what nature does. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 13, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 16, 2010


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