Friday, October 13, 2006

(d) 8 (Nature) Eagle Eyes

Rating: 5.0
Dark smouldering eyes
Shiver ran up my spine
Seething anger inside
His eyes looked straight into mine
Minutes stretching wide
So majestic and acquiline
Frozen to the core, my body numb
His body taut, ready to spring
If the glass had not been there, I would've succumbed
Giving me a last look, he soared up spreading his wings
Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
Tanisha 29 January 2019
Nice ?? cool poem with nature
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Bri Edwards 25 October 2017
you were peering through an aviary window? ? i like it. :) to MyPoemList
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Alison Cassidy 22 February 2007
Awesome is a word to often bandied about carelessly - but in this instance a perfect description of this piece and it's magnificent subject. What a rare privilege you had to experience such a moment - and what a privilege for us that you have chosen to share it. Thanks. love Allie xxxx
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Original Unknown Girl 12 February 2007
TO, how lucky you must've been to have that visitation. In red indian folklore the eagle is a most treasured bird. You captured the fear and the admiration very well here. HG: -) xx
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Preeti - is here! 16 October 2006
this is like a 'minute' captured and put in words, your fear, and his majesty very wll portrayed, liked it! Preets
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Sridhar RVL 15 October 2006
Is it a poem or picture? For a moment I thought of bying this painting. Good work. Hope.
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Felt as though i had been on the 8th floor, visiting, when this occured. Stellar detail & acute depiction.T.O.>>>You paint a picture like a true Artisan. '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
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Patricia Gale 13 October 2006
You have been blessed by the creature of freedom that came to visit you that day. Wonderful write!
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Ronald Stroman 13 October 2006
life is a beautiful thing, when nature does what nature does.
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