Shihabudheen K J

Rookie - 397 Points (13/1/1990 / Edapal)

Dare To Die - Poem by Shihabudheen K J

Hidden trenches along snowy woods
Guaranteed pains nested upon marshy weeds.
Beauty manifests in nature glare but risk
Rain sought thunderless is lusty mock.
All i need to tell you is
'Dare to DIE for pure beauty '.

Comments about Dare To Die by Shihabudheen K J

  • (7/10/2013 8:01:00 AM)

    Dare to die for pure beauty
    i like how it ends

    good one.
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  • Jahan Zeb (2/18/2013 2:43:00 AM)

    Aaaaha that was so cute.
    'Dare to DIE for pure beauty '.

    Like the idea in all the lines. Yes I agree.
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  • Darkangel Flyfree (5/27/2012 10:14:00 AM)

    short but sometimes that all you need is short poetic words to make it good. I like it! ! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (5/12/2012 6:59:00 AM)

    Within a short span of words the flash of beauty is reflected.Awesome! (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2012 10:56:00 PM)

    the poem is very good.i like your usage of imagery (Report) Reply

  • Malini Kadir (5/5/2012 12:43:00 AM)

    strong poetry.......distinct and decisive' (Report) Reply

  • Saniya Galeyeva (4/22/2012 2:20:00 PM)

    A strong poem, as we say it in Russia (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (4/7/2012 6:38:00 AM)

    the use of the word NEED reminds keats' imperishable lines:
    Beauty is truth, truth beauty, that is all
    Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know...
    ....but the problem with modern Man is....he suffers from shortage of he cant dare to die...on such a beauty...even if he wants...
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  • Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/6/2012 12:48:00 PM)

    nice imaginary... i like the meaning of your writing (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2011 12:47:00 PM)

    I really like your use of imagery. Very well done! (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/23/2011 7:11:00 AM)

    Hidden trenches in snowy woods) I like this line! ! !
    plz read my poem death! ! !
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 23, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, June 11, 2012

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