Dare To Die Poem by Shihabudheen K J

Dare To Die

Rating: 2.6

Hidden trenches along snowy woods
Guaranteed pains nested upon marshy weeds.
Beauty manifests in nature glare but risk
Rain sought thunderless is lusty mock.
All i need to tell you is
'Dare to DIE for pure beauty '.

Vipins Puthooran 23 December 2011

Hidden trenches in snowy woods) I like this line! ! ! plz read my poem death! ! !

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Kaitlin Schmidt 27 December 2011

I really like your use of imagery. Very well done!

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 06 March 2012

nice imaginary... i like the meaning of your writing

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Shahzia Batool 07 April 2012

the use of the word NEED reminds keats' imperishable lines: Beauty is truth, truth beauty, that is all Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know... ....but the problem with modern Man is....he suffers from shortage of time...so he cant dare to die...on such a beauty...even if he wants...

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Saniya Galeyeva 22 April 2012

A strong poem, as we say it in Russia

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Julius Lenjatin 10 July 2013

Dare to die for pure beauty i like how it ends good one.

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Jahan Zeb 18 February 2013

Aaaaha that was so cute. 'Dare to DIE for pure beauty '. Like the idea in all the lines. Yes I agree.

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Darkangel Flyfree 27 May 2012

short but sometimes that all you need is short poetic words to make it good. I like it! !

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Neela Nath Das 12 May 2012

Within a short span of words the flash of beauty is reflected.Awesome!

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Masarapu Navyasree 11 May 2012

the poem is very good.i like your usage of imagery

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