Dream Versus Reality Poem by Shihabudheen K J

Dream Versus Reality

Rating: 5.0

I asked my dream yesterday.
'why are you always bringing her image before my closed eyes!
dont you know she is still alive! '
Dream replied nothing but continued showing my princess walking beside me through strange lonely paths holding my hands against her.
She was about to kiss on my forehead for it meant
'love forever evergreen'
Suddenly I was brought to reality.
Now I could know why dream kept silent.
'She could only remain alive in your dreams'.
but I wish to forget her for she had fallen in love with reality.

Ask me.i shall tell you
Darkangel Flyfree 13 November 2012

Wow, this is really good KJ! Dreams always seems better than reality! ! !

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Neela Nath Das 06 November 2012

This is a wow poem. Very earnest and I'm sure right from your heart.

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Haris Adhikari 11 November 2012

Nice way of expression!

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Tiana Webb 11 November 2012

A beautiful poem. Simple yet sweet.

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Alex Medina 12 November 2012

Powerful personification. This was an enjoyable read. Heartfelt and sad, it's great!

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 October 2016

Dreams verses reality! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kanav Justa 06 December 2012

Nice write mayn... keep up

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Suzaku Vaneko 06 December 2012

WOW! Wicked awesome poem! ! Love it! Very interesting!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 20 November 2012

At times we cherish dreams but the reality is otherwise. Wish one could have dreamed on for ever! Nice thought and good write.I feel you have a great potential and can rise high in poetry world. Keep writing, Thanks for the kind invite to share you lovely poem.Best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 20 November 2012

We all have dreams, and it is just lovely. Is it?

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