Uriah Hamilton


Dark Girl - Poem by Uriah Hamilton

One day,
Dogs will laugh
In the streets,
And we’ll kiss wildly
Like lunatics
Escaping the asylum.

You’re a dark girl
So I’m painting
My roses black,

And I’ll murder the sun
If he ever turns his back.

I would rather
Enter the palace of your pain
Than continue to exist
In the prison cell of my loneliness.


Comments about Dark Girl by Uriah Hamilton

  • (12/2/2006 11:59:00 PM)


    this one reminds me of myself and I loved every line (Report) Reply

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  • (8/19/2006 1:58:00 PM)


    at last...someone who respects the emo kids...*lol*

    eni da kid
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  • (3/31/2006 4:39:00 PM)


    What the hell, Uriah? I go away for a few days, come back, and find you wrote a storm of firey passion and a sea of cold beauty. What the hell? ! Absolutely amazing work, pure you, of course. (Report) Reply

  • (3/31/2006 3:39:00 PM)


    I have only read a few of your poem, Uriah, so far... But, I have found myself intrigued by your writing style.

    dan
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  • (3/22/2006 2:14:00 PM)


    this is an awesome poem, Uriah. very Beatific!

    Jake
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  • (3/18/2006 5:30:00 PM)


    ah uriah.. you've done it again, you have left your heart exposed in this poem of dedication to love. you never stop to amaze me :)
    HBH
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  • (3/18/2006 2:35:00 PM)


    I'm rocked, Uriah, well and truly. Outstanding writing. Warm regards, Gina. (Report) Reply

  • (3/17/2006 8:36:00 PM)


    Strong imagery is displayed in this poem which speaks so eloquently of the bonding of two lonely souls.

    Regards,

    Sandra
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  • (3/17/2006 8:02:00 PM)


    Beautiful.........the last stanza says it all. Great poem Uriah. Sincerely, mary (Report) Reply

  • (3/17/2006 7:33:00 PM)


    Damn I must be pissed Uriah, my finger slipped, it should have been 10 for Wow honest to good heartfelt words, or that is the way I read them. Well done and Happy St. Patrick's Day finger licking good! Tai (Report) Reply

  • (3/17/2006 7:32:00 PM)


    insight
    into self
    the other
    and the monumental necessity
    of the heart
    for closeness
    that great declaration
    creating poetry
    of the utmost honesty
    and beauty.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 17, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, March 17, 2006


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