Uriah Hamilton

Dark Girl

One day,
Dogs will laugh
In the streets,
And we’ll kiss wildly
Like lunatics
Escaping the asylum.

You’re a dark girl
So I’m painting
My roses black,

And I’ll murder the sun
If he ever turns his back.

I would rather
Enter the palace of your pain
Than continue to exist
In the prison cell of my loneliness.

Poem Submitted: Friday, March 17, 2006
Poem Edited: Friday, March 17, 2006

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Comments about Dark Girl by Uriah Hamilton

  • Austen Bradford (12/2/2006 11:59:00 PM)

    this one reminds me of myself and I loved every line

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  • Ebone' Ingram (8/19/2006 1:58:00 PM)

    at last...someone who respects the emo kids...*lol*

    eni da kid

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  • Joy Vanderhelm (3/31/2006 4:39:00 PM)

    What the hell, Uriah? I go away for a few days, come back, and find you wrote a storm of firey passion and a sea of cold beauty. What the hell? ! Absolutely amazing work, pure you, of course.

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  • Dan Tharp (3/31/2006 3:39:00 PM)

    I have only read a few of your poem, Uriah, so far... But, I have found myself intrigued by your writing style.

    dan

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  • Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler (3/22/2006 2:14:00 PM)

    this is an awesome poem, Uriah. very Beatific!

    Jake

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  • Ivy Christou (3/18/2006 5:30:00 PM)

    ah uriah.. you've done it again, you have left your heart exposed in this poem of dedication to love. you never stop to amaze me :)
    HBH

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  • Gina Onyemaechi (3/18/2006 2:35:00 PM)

    I'm rocked, Uriah, well and truly. Outstanding writing. Warm regards, Gina.

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  • Sandra Fowler (3/17/2006 8:36:00 PM)

    Strong imagery is displayed in this poem which speaks so eloquently of the bonding of two lonely souls.

    Regards,

    Sandra

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  • Mary Nagy (3/17/2006 8:02:00 PM)

    Beautiful.........the last stanza says it all. Great poem Uriah. Sincerely, mary

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  • ***** ********* (3/17/2006 7:33:00 PM)

    Damn I must be pissed Uriah, my finger slipped, it should have been 10 for Wow honest to good heartfelt words, or that is the way I read them. Well done and Happy St. Patrick's Day finger licking good! Tai

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  • Charles Chaim Wax (3/17/2006 7:32:00 PM)

    insight
    into self
    the other
    and the monumental necessity
    of the heart
    for closeness
    that great declaration
    creating poetry
    of the utmost honesty
    and beauty.

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