Darkest Hour Poem by Patricia Gale

Darkest Hour

Rating: 4.8


Come to me now sweet surrender
Bring peace unto a troubled soul
Lay me down where serenity's is found in silence's embrace
Take me here.... this moment..... pass me not
For tears fall like the sands of time
Rivers of regret flood a broken soul
Flashing and rushing the course of pain
Oh come thee now sweet angel of mercy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C F 30 April 2019

Good of you to have visited PoemHunter today, otherwise I would have missed your poems entirely. Nice title, Darkest Hour, and very good verse.10+

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, patricia. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Ruby Honeytip 20 November 2012

Geez Louise....I've been here....struggling through the Abyss. Very descriptive write. Anyone feeling this way should seek out bliss immediately!

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Marvin Brato 18 May 2012

Life is not perfect, there comes a time when we are down and broken! Well-penned!

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