# Darling...Don'T Keep Me Waiting Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

The desire is great, tells many chapter of your profound love Matchaa!

Incredably inductive. Wow! You can't rush it lest you build a hut. You are in the business of building palaces my friend and that takes time. I like the personification. Well done! 10/10

very nicely written... sweet and amusing... waiting until the muse came...but with the urgency and heartfelt plea... the words chosen add suspense to it this is a very interesting write...impressive 10++++ Maia

good humour with a sense of purpose...and with a sense of urgency too...10

The darling is a closed pen. It is a surprise and a suspense till the end.

Love is sure worth waiting for and if she reads this poem she will be back in a flash...nice one Sam ++++10

She waits to be held in your rms And sway to a waltz As always you lead on But it she who waits For a beloved as yearning as you. True hearts never speak But only always in poetry!

This is the first poem I read from you that is moderatley simple. Not saying it's a bad thing. After the first couple of lines I mistook you for talking of a child who's learning to walk, thought, 'uhp, i know where this is going.' The surprise at the end was fantastic and I couldn't have said it better if I tried. This is a great poem.

Sam, initially I mistook it but you are on the right lines. You say it so beautifully and truly. CP

a poets nightmare is when the words no longer come freely, and the memories of the past lingers on your lips. BEAUTIFUL