Death Of A Street Boy Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Death Of A Street Boy

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A street boy died days gone by
No newspaper found interested
Died as a person, a yellow leaf
Prefixed death of a living being

Dawn and time under a big tree
Enjoyed burning summer-noon
Evening mutely entered rat-hole
Silent moon passed by this way

Street person's death— too light
Exited through indifferent door
But no change or effect sprouts
Like pop star— Michel Jackson

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelvin Karani 06 August 2009

Its encouraging to find some voice for the street people. Unfortunately, in our capitalist world, you don't have to be an urchin to die unsung.

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Ejaz Khan 04 August 2009

Are you on vacation, little troubled n depressed or just fed up from unworthy readers? I undertsand your silence, remember, this too shall pass, whatever it is. You'll bounce back! Regards

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Miriam Maia Padua 18 July 2009

so touching...with truth... lines that flows with depth 10+++ lovelots, maia

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Obed Souza 15 July 2009

Wonderful piece.10! People die many ways... I´m a teacher, I see teens dying in the streets, at home, at schools, everywhere... I thank God I can reach some of them... some are lost forever... Would you please, take a look at my poem ' Stolen Identity'? It tells of a lost child... Keep in touch!

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Saadat Tahir 15 July 2009

life is replete with undung great men and true heroes....what to talk of a mundane 'urchin'... in the huge megalopoces of this world from mumbai to karachi from tokyo to rio...life just crawls on the footsteps and no body gives a damn superb lines great content very well written cheers

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Wahab Abdul 08 January 2012

nice poem..though very sad...this poem says lot about humanity...please read my poems

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Issam Hal 04 July 2010

really so great lines make u watch this poem's image so clear.

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Zobaer Bin Liaquot 01 May 2010

So touching........ dear sir 10+

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Lillian Thomas 23 October 2009

very well written. The images captured are stunning. My favorite lines are: 'Evening mutely entered rat-hole Silent moon passed by this way'

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Segun Johnson Ozique 26 August 2009

True, so true and sad. I got tear forming as I write this. Few streets from here, where I live - Adura, lagos - Nigeria, close to a major TV station; AIT. There's been a woman dead along a major road the past five days. Everyone knew, Everyone walked passed, I passed. On the day Michael died, AIT aired it for hours, days and weeks. The dead woman is still there and then I read 'Death of a Streetboy...sorry, got to stop now, my vision's blurring...

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