His love is like
The silvery dew that
Clings on soft petals
Of lovely flowers
So fleeting as the air
That touches
A beautiful face.
Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin,All Rights Reserved
transient the heart of drone this to that flower kissing the honey withering the petals (body of flower) deflowering by the humming, buzzing (beautiful song of life) running, flying all to illusory affection
So worthy of another reread and to feel poetry enriched. Thanks again Rose Marie and another most deserved full score.
The title says it all this love is not to be trusted! the most suitable title for this poem. For every reader this is an entertaining and impressing poem, since the words are chosen perfectly
and presented to show us the correct vision of a deceitful love. A 10 full score.and toMyPoemsList! Thank you so much for sharing, dear great poetess! I assure you that I'll come back to reread this loveliest poem once again!
Opposite side of true love has been candidly expressed here in this wonderful poem! Beautifully put....5 stars.
Love and art! ! ! Muse of someone at hand. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes, dear poetess, deceitful love is lika a drop of dew that clings to a beautiful flower. The dew will disappear soon the sun rises....10
A wonderfully composed piece, having the qualities of a lovely poem. Truly exceptional....10++❤️❤️❤️
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent writing and such a perfectly presented and beautifully imagined poem by a world-class poetess who always knows how to write such a unique standalone poem. A world-class poetess by the name of Rose Marie Juan Austin. And I thank you Rose Marie and a most well deserved 10 full score and it should be much more for poetry woven fine gold.