Dedicated To Liz.

Rating: 4.9
i thank god for every second that we can share,
for its moments like this that im happy you are there,
you are everything that i asked for in my prayer,
its like god send me an angel when nobody cared,
you showed me love and took away the pain,
you brought back the sun and since there hasnt been any rain,
you are the reason why everyday i smile,
how can i thank you for blessing me with a child,
and even though ive made mistakes in the past,
theres nothing i want more than to make this love last,
you have grown to be part of my life,
and i pray to god that someday you will walk with me as my wife,
i have dreams of starting a family of our own,
i can see it so clear living inside our happy home,
because i never seen a sky so blue,
until the day i told you how much i loved you.

Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

dedicated to my wife: elizabeth garcia 3/28/03 i love you!
Friday, January 2, 2009
Kym Toohey 16 October 2009
Nice poem buddy yet this line seems outta place...'i have dreams of starting a family of our own' since you have already thanked Liz for blessing you with a child. So I'd rework it to flow in a timeline. Sweet poem... she's a lucky girl to have the heart of a poet by her side.
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April Levins 13 October 2009
Express the essence of a love that only grows with the actions you show! ! !
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This piece is full of intense emotion, each word expressing how deep is your love for Liz. Lovely creation for someone who really meant for you. Gracias! best regards, jdh
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Sally Plumb Plumb 13 October 2009
Lucky woman, lucky man.Great!
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Erin Ford 11 September 2009
poems about love are always heartfelt, but you put a little of your soul when you write.and i wish you and your wife many years of joy.
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Tyease Collins 19 August 2009
I'm so happy for you two =]] I wish you guys the best in anything that you guys do God Bless <3 -Liz
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Marissa Hollis 19 August 2009
20/10. that was amazing. ima sucker for a good romantic poem. that was beautiful.
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Mona Martinez 15 August 2009
aww! ! ! very beautiful. she's a very lucky woman and very special to you. i loved this poem very much because i felt all of the emotion you feel for her. very lovely. keep writting. :)
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Ashley Davis 12 August 2009
aw that is really sweet! very deep and i could hear the passion in the voice in the poem great job! keep it up! give it a 10!
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Antoinette Valentine 11 February 2009
I loved it! ! ! It was very beautiful.
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