Sunday, January 25, 2009

Crystal Meth.

Rating: 4.8
hi crystal how you been?
it's me your ex from way back then,
i remember how you made me feel,
do you remember how i almost got killed,
there where times you made me rob and steal,
i would stay up and look for you all night,
there where times i would argue and fight,
sometimes i wouldn't get a wink of sleep,
just waiting for you to come and creep,
you made me imagine things that weren't there,
i thought you loved me but in reality you didn't care,
when i almost overdosed you weren't there,
i got real skiny and pail and people just stared,
my mouth was dry and i couldn't eat,
there where times when i just thought you brought me to defeat,
we should have broken up years ago,
but for some reason i just couldn't let go,
you took away everything to a point
where there was almost nothing left,
but i'll never forget your first or last name crystal meth....

Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia
Addict 12 February 2019
Thank you for your words of truth
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The Lost.. 14 October 2009
you made me imagine things that weren't there, i thought you loved me but in reality you didn't care, actually when u love someone you feel that he also loves u then u realise that he hates u :) nice poem.
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Aube Joshua 14 October 2009
I donot know if there is a man or a woman who breathes and has not once in life been 'defeated' in love. But if there is one, s/he has not known a whole dimension of life. For, pain, as it can cripple, can also open unknown galleries of experience and sensitivity. Sometimes, one cannot rate a poem, because one cannot have an objective view of it. I can just say thanks very much for sharing.
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Lynn Glover 13 October 2009
Well Jose, I like the rhythem and the subject. I hope you are sincere in staying away from this stuff. I only have heard about these drugs, but never did any so I don't know how hard it is to stop. I just pray that you have defeated this monster. Good message for anyone who would dare to think about doing. I reallly like the way you composed the poem, a very good write. Your friend Lynn.
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James Mclain 13 October 2009
I have never done it but i have heard of people that have it is a bad disease like all the rest.. and there is hope but it has to start in the heart of the one that needs it...iip
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Rhiley Anne Vincent 13 October 2009
Well written. The extended metaphor makes it easier to relate to.
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Krishnarasa Seshadri 13 October 2009
A message worth remembering! Very well penned! Thank you for sharing....
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Marilyn Lott 28 September 2009
You send out an urgent message to those who have even 'thought' about using this horrible stuff. I've heard terrible stories and seen some who got sucked into this nightmare. Good for you for stopping it and sending the message. '10+++! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
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George Anastasia 21 September 2009
Oh just one more thing Jose. If you could check out my poem callled Fire Fight. I also have live reads on my space and you tube. uner the key word of George Garrett Anastasia. let me know what you think. Thank s The lightman George Garrett Anastasia.
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George Anastasia 21 September 2009
Bewear of the surptions stainless steals bit. He will creep on up, day or night make you think everything is alright, but only death in the seriptions bite. I to am a ex-user. You did a good job on this poem. The Lightman George Garrett Anastasia.
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