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JOSE MURGUIA
JOSE MURGUIA
(4/14/80 / aztlan CITY OF ANGELZ! (EL MONTE))
Crystal Meth. - Poem by JOSE MURGUIA
hi crystal how you been?
it's me your ex from way back then,
i remember how you made me feel,
do you remember how i almost got killed,
there where times you made me rob and steal,
i would stay up and look for you all night,
there where times i would argue and fight,
sometimes i wouldn't get a wink of sleep,
just waiting for you to come and creep,
you made me imagine things that weren't there,
i thought you loved me but in reality you didn't care,
when i almost overdosed you weren't there,
i got real skiny and pail and people just stared,
my mouth was dry and i couldn't eat,
there where times when i just thought you brought me to defeat,
we should have broken up years ago,
but for some reason i just couldn't let go,
you took away everything to a point
where there was almost nothing left,
but i'll never forget your first or last name crystal meth....
01/24/2009
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia
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you made me imagine things that weren't there,
i thought you loved me but in reality you didn't care,
actually when u love someone you feel that he also loves u then u realise that he hates u :)
nice poem. (Report) Reply
I donot know if there is a man or a woman who breathes and has not once in life been 'defeated' in love. But if there is one, s/he has not known a whole dimension of life. For, pain, as it can cripple, can also open unknown galleries of experience and sensitivity. Sometimes, one cannot rate a poem, because one cannot have an objective view of it. I can just say thanks very much for sharing. (Report) Reply
Well Jose, I like the rhythem and the subject. I hope you are sincere in staying away from this stuff. I only have heard about these drugs, but never did any so I don't know how hard it is to stop. I just pray that you have defeated this monster. Good message for anyone who would dare to think about doing. I reallly like the way you composed the poem, a very good write. Your friend Lynn. (Report) Reply
I have never done it
but i have heard of people that have
it is a bad disease like all the rest..
and there is hope but it has to start
in the heart of the one that needs it...iip (Report) Reply
Well written. The extended metaphor makes it easier to relate to. (Report) Reply
A message worth remembering! Very well penned! Thank you for sharing.... (Report) Reply
You send out an urgent message to those who have even 'thought' about using this horrible stuff. I've heard terrible stories and seen some who got sucked into this nightmare. Good for you for stopping it and sending the message. '10+++! '
Warm Wishes,
Marilyn (Report) Reply
Oh just one more thing Jose. If you could check out my poem callled Fire Fight. I also have live reads on my space and you tube. uner the key word of George Garrett Anastasia. let me know what you think. Thank s The lightman George Garrett Anastasia. (Report) Reply
Bewear of the surptions stainless steals bit. He will creep on up, day or night make you think everything is alright, but only death in the seriptions bite. I to am a ex-user. You did a good job on this poem. The Lightman George Garrett Anastasia. (Report) Reply
I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK (Report) Reply
OMG! ! ! ! ! ! ! STANDING OVATION JOSE! I TOO AM IN RECOVERY. I CELEBRATE 1 YR THIS MONTH AND MY BELLY BUTTON TOMORROW! LET'S TALK! (Report) Reply
Omg I luv this poem...and u did a good job...u could be a role model for other with poetry and u are a warm hearted person and the ability to write the world (Report) Reply
Its true it can be addicting but im glad you stopped! Great poem! (Report) Reply
I like your poetry,
for its simplicity and honesty,
People could relate to this,
the addiction, the rush,
Hope you're done with all this mess,
You have your life and poetry, this you are blessed! ! ! ! (Report) Reply
This is one great poem, its very true! ! (Report) Reply
This poem is great. I do hope u and crystal meth r done! ! ! (Report) Reply
Very raw, honest and real. Congratulations, a job well done. PS: typographical error on 'pail' it should be pale. Keep writing, you are a good poet. (Report) Reply
i dont say this often, but amazing poem, great wording, very well written.
serously not just saying that. 10 out of 10 (Report) Reply
Wow! Good poem. I like the way you personify the drug like a bad ex girlfriend! That's really good. (Report) Reply
This poem really hits home. I bit of a diffrent demon but still ever so real (Report) Reply