She told me once
Her deep dark secret
I will take it to my grave
To be told
Was an honour
A dramatic scene
Replayed
Taken back
To the moment
Eyes filled with sadness
Feeling pure emotion in her voice
Anger in each breath
Yet feeling
A weight beared
When this deep... dark secret
Was shared
This secret locked
For many years
Were mine...
The only ears?
So proud
To have been told
This bond shared
Till I am old
To my death
It shall never... unfold
May your words
Lighten your pain
This secret lost
In the pouring rain
Copyright Reserved May 2014
Lyn Paul
Tears are the most efficient cleanser to clean our heart what i feel. Well written and touching the deep of my heart.
Secrets should always be respected and kept, as long as their content is not likely to harm others. Well expressed.
Wonderful words that forges a feature of a fantastic friend. Well done my friend.
Very captivating poem..This shows the qualities of a true friend, who is good at heart to keep the secret sincerely and to lighten the pain of a friend as well. Loved the way you presented it.
A secret shared with one single soul and never divulged to anyone else will remain a secret for ever, at the same time it will relieve the burden of the one who has been carrying it! If someone, trusting us shares a secret, we are bound to keep it with ourselves. It is a rare quality. A great poem too!
The secret of a secret shared but not revealed, unburdening both your cares, strong write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
good writing, I like it, thanks.