MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
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~ Delight Unalloyed ~

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~ DELIGHT UNALLOYED ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
26 July 26,2010

Come alive
In Pure Delight
O’ You.

Douse
Dive deep into
Ocean of ambrosia.

Watch Oh
The Light
Nascent
Supreme
Emerging from
The setting sky
Of bosom
Oh You.

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Adapted from RNT [for detail info please read Bliss ~ niv]

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Photode Photode 23 May 2012
Aha...excellent..bejesus swayed by wordings..Watch Oh....splendid Poet has nicely adapted from RNT... She is maturing in RNT I suppose Though I know it is very difficult to adapt RNT nevertheless her effort is commendable Thanks sharing...Tenner
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Annabel Cruz 10 March 2012
Much better! This I like...your alliteration here works because you have tied it into your imagery. good one.
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Sierra Bouvier 12 March 2011
Oh my gosh this is really good! ! ! (:
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Luz Hanaii 25 February 2011
I'm no expert but I know when something is good. Loved it!
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Subbaraman N V 18 January 2011
As usual good with a message!
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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 19 September 2010
This is a very romantic and sensuous verse full of contemplation and philosophy too. I liked the variety presented in the verse 'through flowers'.
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Bryandominic Chidiebere 07 September 2010
Your poem is so passionate, keep it up.
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Bryandominic Chidiebere 07 September 2010
Your poem is so passionate, keep it up.
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Terence George Craddock 29 August 2010
an invitation to life to dive into divine sea of light this is divine ambrosia this world needs to drink on a sea of love compassion all should embrace be drunk on
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Marieta Maglas 09 August 2010
A thought -provoking poem. Thnx for sharing.
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