~ DELIGHT UNALLOYED ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
26 July 26,2010
Come alive
In Pure Delight
O’ You.
Douse
Dive deep into
Ocean of ambrosia.
Watch Oh
The Light
Nascent
Supreme
Emerging from
The setting sky
Of bosom
Oh You.
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Adapted from RNT [for detail info please read Bliss ~ niv]
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The greatest delight of reading your poems is honesty! Niv, you have proven yourself beyond your own boundaries, to me and the rest of the world! God Bless You! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace...
Your poem gives me such pleasure with 'Oh You' i e that which my delight derives. Niv, this poem rings piercingly true as it showcases your amazing talent. Love you dear. Hope youre having a good summer...it'shot in New York. I was away a couple weeks
O you don't stop impressing us! ....very nice indeed i feel delight while reading your poems..... thanks for sharing
Aha...excellent..bejesus swayed by wordings..Watch Oh....splendid Poet has nicely adapted from RNT... She is maturing in RNT I suppose Though I know it is very difficult to adapt RNT nevertheless her effort is commendable Thanks sharing...Tenner
Much better! This I like...your alliteration here works because you have tied it into your imagery. good one.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice Crystal clear and transparent cascade, thanks for sharing,10+