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Desire

Rating: 3.7
My desire
is always the same; wherever Life
deposits me:
I want to stick my toe
& soon my whole body
into the water.
I want to shake out a fat broom
& sweep dried leaves
bruised blossoms
dead insects
& dust.
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COMMENTS
Dr Antony Theodore 05 November 2020
It seems impossible that desire can sometimes transform into devotion; but this has happened. yes it is true, Desire can transform into devotion. thank you for this verse. tony
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A B Faniki 28 July 2019
Heartfelt and beautiful. Thanks for sharing
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demarcus smith 31 January 2019
good job on this poem
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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 01 July 2018
Nice message brought out in this poem.
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Savita Tyagi 01 July 2018
A desire to transform the world for better.....no devotion could be better than this.
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Jeffrey 21 April 2018
what is the pattern or ryhme scheme of this poem
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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 January 2016
Amazing desire beautifully penned and thought provoking too. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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Manonton Dalan 25 January 2016
it is achievable desire... nice poem
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Kim Barney 25 January 2016
This poem is excellent! Why have 23 voters only given it a 6.9 out of ten rating? They should be ashamed.
6 4 Reply
Howard Savage 25 January 2016
The profoundness of How the hole I carefully tended in the garden of my heart grew a heart to fill it. It is the hole where the first hert use to be. Simply Profound. #10
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